Wookieepedia:AC/Meeting 118

Welcome, one and all, to AgriCorps Meeting 118, which will be held in honor of the Pacor sector on July 27, 2019 at 3 PM ET / 7 PM UTC. Please leaves notes if you cannot attend. Otherwise, fasten your seat-belts, for the next stop is the Traval-Pacor system!

Traval-Parcor System Institute of Technology

Ho'Din ecology students

• Strategic Resources of the Galaxy (diff • review) — Extended from Meeting 117
• 3B3-1204 (diff • review)
• Electro-dart (diff • review)
• Gira (diff • review)
• Graffiti-bomb (diff • review)
• Kelbis Nu (diff • review)
• Larrim (diff • review)
• Mondo-Mod (diff • review)
• Penetrator (diff • review)
• Plevitz (diff • review)
• Pumav (diff • review)
• Quad Victor (diff • review)
• The Rakata and the Unknown World (diff • review)
• Set (diff • review)
• Tresk Im'nel (diff • review)
• Xexto (diff • review)
• Ychna (diff • review)

Anti-technological saboteurs

Expand as needed. The bin.

• Tolga
  • P&T needs splitting to make an equipment section.
  • Body could probably be split allowing for another quote and image if they exist.
  • Tolga's gender could probably be mentioned at the start of the Bio instead of his skin color, which should be in P&T.
  • We don't include None for hair or affiliation anymore to my knowledge.
  • Eye color is infobox exclusive.
  • That date presumably needs a reference.
  • Various context needed for the body. There are various sentences where the subject(s) are also unclear e.g "to apprehend the Twi'lek", no Twi'lek has been refered to in the article prior to this.
  • BTS needs sourcing, plus dates and authors.
  • I think the alternate paths could probably also be fleshed out a bit. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:28, July 20, 2019 (UTC)
• Tutso Mara/Legends
  • I feel like the article should at least look into the possibility of splitting the Biography into two subsections, now that Monobook has given way to Oasis skin's wider margins. The possibility of adding another quote and moving the P/T image into the Bio is now tenable.
  • The last sentence of the BTS can just be removed.
  • The air date for the episode can no longer be sourced to the Episode Guide.
  • Redlink in Sources list.
  • I'm not sure it's strictly necessary to use the double reference here. I realize this is being done to source the timeline, but I feel like these individual refs can be placed after specific portions of this sentence rather than just tacked onto the end: "His friend Offee similarly approached a promotion to Knighthood around the same time.[6][7]". Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC)
• S'yito
  • No ABY dates found in the article. Certainly at least one can be added.
  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • General underlinking
  • All three of the Bio paragraphs look like they could use paragraph breaks
  • BTS unsourced. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Rakririan
  • Dating:
    • The 22 BBY date cannot be sourced straight to the HNN article, which only uses GrS
    • Some kind of dating can be used for Sabodor's (second "in the galaxy paragraph)
    • The bit about Plo Koon could use some kind of dating as well. And I'm not sure that paragraph shouldn't actually be placed before Sabodor's, since it's more relevant to the Clone Wars era, while Sabodor's is much closer to the OT period.
  • Fix image caption punctuation
  • Don't know why this would need multiple refs. If individual parts of that sentence need to be cited individually, then that should be done, but don't just tack refs onto the end of the sentence: "The Rakririan homeworld was the planet Rakrir[1][4]"
  • What specifically makes these exceptions "notable"? Does the source actually use that term? "...there were a few notable exceptions."
  • BTS unsourced
  • There is no such thing as "ambiguous canon" in Legends anymore. That template can be removed from the Appearances list. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Vune Willic
  • It's a requirement that articles be referenced by individual comic issue, and that individual comic issues are listed as such in the Appearances list. This would naturally apply, then, to similar things, such as these Planet Hopper articles, which is already a precedent anyways. See Mountain Terrain Scout Transport, for example. This article should follow suit.
  • None of the individual "Coruscant: Center of the Empire" issues mention the Battle of Yavin, which leaves me a bit unclear how the article is arriving at the conclusion that he died "ABY." I feel like that should be clarified in a reference note.
  • Adding to the previous objection, there really isn't any solid context given for a time period in the article body either.
  • General underlinking.
  • Species is exclusive to the infobox and intro.
  • Single-sentence paragraphs are ideally avoided (see end of first Bio subsection).
  • BTS is unsourced. Publication date(s) would be nice too. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Titterbug
  • Underlinking
  • Reference 2 is far too general of a comparison to arrive at such a specific figure of 0.33 meters
  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • Behind the Magic doesn't reference this article subject or the exact episode it appears in, with regards to the 3 ABY date. It only give a general timeline for the Ewoks series, which should be reflected in a more detailed reference note explanation.
  • Redirect in BTS
  • BTS not fully sourced.
• Iziz defense tower
  • For starters, I feel like this article could be moved to a non-conjectural title at just "Defense tower," which is what the source calls this thing.
  • Underlinking throughout article
  • None of the BBY dates appear to be referenced correctly
  • Fix image caption punctuation
  • Revise image placement in article body with respect to Oasis skin
  • BTS unsourced
  • Articles need to be referenced by individual comic issue, not story arc. Issues also need to be listed as such in the Appearances. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Jev Sunrider
  • Underlinking
  • Reference 1 is based entirely on citing the 3999 BBY date to TOTJ 3, which itself is not properly referenced, since the TOTJ comics didn't use BBY dates.
  • BTS unsourced. Publication date would be nice. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Kurt
  • Needs {{Conjecturespell}}
  • None of the BBY dates are properly referenced
  • Fix bullet point usage in infobox
  • Bio would benefit from subsectioning, which will allow for the addition of one or more quotes, if available
  • BTS:
    • Unsourced
    • Publication date would be nice
    • Some of the wording needs to be revised to reflect Legends canon. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Ktriss
  • 3999 BBY is not referenced properly
  • I feel like some of the character's physical descriptions that are inherent to the species don't need to be mentioned in the P/T.
  • BTS:
    • Unsourced
    • Things like publication dates and comic illustrator would be nice
  • Needs to be cleaned up for misplaced italics
  • Redirects
  • The Appearances needs to list individual comic issues, not story arc. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Sunrider naming controversy
  • Unreferenced article body.
  • References should be as specific as possible and point to individual comic issues instead of whole story arcs.
  • Missing backup links.
  • Redirects.
  • Ref 20 should state specific TOR missions.
  • The reference list warrants the use of {{Scroll box}}. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:13, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Civilian-operated Class II shipyard

Expand as needed.

• Meeting responsibilities. Tommy Macaroni 17:08, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Orinda campaign

Reaper and the 181st

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:27, July 12, 2019 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:29, July 12, 2019 (UTC)
3. I think you mean the Parkour system. MasterFred^(Whatever) 08:59, July 13, 2019 (UTC)
4. Exiled Jedi (talk) 23:21, July 14, 2019 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC)
6. Tommy Macaroni 19:26, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Lusankya and the Rogues

1. Work. 1358 ^(Talk) 21:33, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

New Republic victory

Ecks

• Keep Strategic Resources of the Galaxy, kill everything else. Probe everything new.
• Support the new meeting responsibilities system. I'll try to time my break at work to coincide with the meeting, but Tommy gets my vote on everything else if I don't show up. 1358 ^(Talk) 10:48, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Notes McNoteface

• Per ecks. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:50, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• AnilSerifoglu
• Ayrehead02
• Exiledjedi
• Master Fredcerique
• Tommy-Macaroni
• Toprawa and Ralltiir

Articles that had their status removed

• Strategic Resources of the Galaxy
• 3B3-1204
• Electro-dart
• Gira
• Graffiti-bomb
• Kelbis Nu
• Larrim
• Mondo-Mod
• Penetrator
• Plevitz
• Pumav
• Quad Victor
• The Rakata and the Unknown World
• Set
• Tresk Im'nel
• Xexto
• Ychna

Articles placed on probation

• Tolga
• Tutso Mara/Legends
• Rakririan
• Vune Willic
• Titterbug
• Iziz defense tower
• Jev Sunrider
• Kurt
• Ktriss
• Sunrider naming controversy
• Recon-PK series droid

Motions

• The AC voted 8-0 in favor of adopting new meeting duties system.

Meeting duties

• Paperwork: Xd1358
• Log