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Pumav
Things to do
- None of the BBY dates can be sourced to the HNN article, which only uses GrS
- This article sits at 260 words, by my count, and I see quite a bit of fluff that should probably just be removed, in which case I don't see how this article maintains the 250-world threshold:
- "in the Core Worlds region,[2]" is just unnecessary and doesn't add any extra context or substance to the article
- "during the waning days of the Galactic Republic." is not supported by the HNN article
- "Pumav was capable of racing on either two or four limbs" is repeated between the Bio and P/T. This doesn't need to be mentioned twice.
- "only appearance in Star Wars canon" is mostly unnecessary now in light of Legends. Just say he "appeared in" this HNN article.
- "released on April 18, 2002" isn't stated anywhere in the HNN article
- BTS unsourced. MasterFred
(Whatever) 23:41, July 1, 2019 (UTC)
Removal of GA status
- Placed on probation at Meeting 117. MasterFred(Whatever) 23:41, July 1, 2019 (UTC)
- Status removed at Meeting 118. 1358 (Talk) 21:43, July 30, 2019 (UTC)