The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a re-featured article nomination that was unsuccessful
Joram Kithe
- Originally nominated by: Havac
- Last featured on: June 3, 2007
- Changes since last review: diff
- Date placed on this page: May 15, 2011
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—Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 03:12, January 26, 2012 (UTC)
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At a glance, the Bts needs some expansion. He's also mention in the CSWE, which should be added to the Sources list.Kilson(Let's have a chat) 05:22, June 14, 2011 (UTC)- Done. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:38, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa
- I'm questioning whether the missle factory here should have an article: "...destroying a missile factory on the way."
- Does the source literally state he has black hair? Because his hair is clearly brown in the infobox picture.
- Sounds like speculation here. Does the source submit this as a fact? "However, he may have been more principled than he thought."
- Judging from the main image, it looks like the article could detail some of the equipment he uses in an "Equipment" section. I'm seeing goggles, binoculars?/macrobinoculars?, and a utility belt at least. Maybe some other things cut off in the image crop.
- Since the character is mentioned in CSWE but not within his own entry, the Sources list needs to use {{CSWECite}} as policy prescribes. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:26, June 30, 2014 (UTC)
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