The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a re-featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Hoth (individual)
- Originally nominated by: QuentinGeorge
- Last featured on: April 29, 2007
- Changes since last review: diff
- Date placed on this page: May 15, 2011
(4 Inqs/0 Users/4 Total)
Support
Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:36, June 7, 2011 (UTC)- Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 20:20, July 8, 2011 (UTC) 
Cold as ice. Menkooroo 06:07, July 9, 2011 (UTC)- —Tommy 9281 Saturday, July 9, 2011, 06:36 UTC
Object
- Moffship
Species and gender should be mentioned in the intro and the bio.If Dree Vandap and Tal were trained by Hoth, they should be listed in some capacity in the "Apprentices" field of the infobox. (Would do this myself, but I don't know enough about these individuals.)His status as a Jedi Master is not mentioned until the middle of the bio; his status as a Jedi Lord is not even in the bio.- Got these three. Will work on the rest soon. Menkooroo 08:50, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
Context is needed on Darth Bane in the bio.- Added.
The P&T could probably be expanded.- How's this? Menkooroo 05:41, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
No P&A section.- In regards to this one, there's no info for one. I don't think he ever even uses the Force in a work. - Lord Hydronium 06:01, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
A lot of the "Name" section of the BTS seems unnecessary; there's also speculation in the first two sentences. The last sentence is all that is really relevant to the character, and it should be incorporated into a new section detailing his origins (a "Hoth was created for the video game Dark Forces: Jedi Knight before appearing in..." kind of paragraph).Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 18:24, June 19, 2011 (UTC)
- Cleaned it up considerably. I can't access the TOR forums at work, but I'll add a leading quote from Drew when I get home. Menkooroo 05:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 06:36, July 9, 2011 (UTC)