Sate Pestage

Things to do

underlinking, examples of "unknown" OOU perspectives, succession box lacks before-years and after-years, {{Fact}} tag in the article, and {{WebCite}} needs to be used for non-templated citations. Requires more context in numerous places, particularly the beginning of the Bio—too much is left unexplained to the casual, perhaps less knowledgeable reader. Also, a better job needs to be done with handling the conflict of his death; the in-universe part of the article presents speculation on whether he actually died a second time, which is still unwarranted in the Bio in spite of the complexity of the conflict. CC7567 (talk) 07:17, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Removal of FA status

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