Wookieepedia:Inq/Meeting 120

Inquisitorius Meeting 120 Colonies Meeting will be held at 7:00 PM UTC / 2:00 PM ET on Saturday, November 21. Please leave notes if you are unable to attend.

From the Northern Dependencies to the Southern Core

Get an Imperial Army light repeating blaster shoved in your face on the heavily populated Uviuy Exen

• Battle of Christophsis/Legends (diff • review)
• Humbarine/Legends (diff • review)
• Aargau/Legends (diff • review)
• Kolatill (diff • review)
• Yanibar (diff • review)
• New Bakstre (diff • review)
• Boz Pity/Legends (diff • review)
• Xamuel Lennox (diff • review)
• Moorja/Legends (diff • review)
• Intimidator (Executor-class) (diff • review)

Smuggle "living repulsorlift" airsnakes off the moist Enaleh

Expand as needed. See Maintenance bin.

• Clabburn the Elder
  • Dates require better referencing.
  • Biography needs to be split into several subsections for better presentation in the Oasis skin. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:14, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
• Cadomai Prime/Legends - Recently added source should be checked for possible update. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:36, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Yarco's merely adding dots from the map in the book, there's no new info. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:02, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
• Delrakkin/Legends - Recently added source should be checked for possible update. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:36, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Same as above. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:02, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
• Darth Bane - Article was recently updated for The Star Wars Book, but those involved in doing so have admitted they didn't check the entire book for any more potential missing info, which should be done. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:15, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
  • And it now has another update needed. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:13, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
• Tydirium/Legends
  • BTS needs:
    • Sourcing
    • Subsectionig
    • Change wording to fit with the canon/Legends split.
  • Large Monobook-era paragraphs need to be shrunk down, possible subsectioning in the body needed.
  • Dates appear to be unsourced. Sources need to be checked to see if they actually use the dates as the article currently suggests.
  • I feel the article is lacking in images.
  • Infobox exclusive information.
  • Duplicate link(s).
  • Image caption punctuation is incorrect.
  • Article needs to follow the MOS' link formatting.
  • Image links need to use the formatting thumb|position|size.
  • Underlinking. Tommy-Macaroni 22:08, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Needs imagecat.
  • Wikipedia link is now defunct and should be removed. Tommy-Macaroni 12:08, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
• Jutka
  • I feel like the intro just doesn't need to be three paragraphs. Compared to the size of the Bio, it looks a little on the large size. Two solid paragraphs should be enough.
  • I don't believe 8 ABY can be sourced straight to DarkStryder material without an explanatory note. And the 19 ABY date is intro-exclusive and is definitely not self-sourcing.
  • General underlinking and redirect
  • Format quote and image attributions correctly for punctuation
  • The body images should be reformatted so they're not running into the section's quotes. Additionally, the Talon Karrde image could use a more descriptive caption, as could the P/T image to justify its usage there.
  • Any Equipment section?
  • BTS unsourced. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:09, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
• Cypher Bos
  • 3 ABY is exclusive to the intro and infobox, and cannot be sourced straight to Double Cross
  • 24 ABY also cannot be sourced to Young Jedi Knights
  • General underlinking and linking cleanup needed (like not linking to disambig pages)
  • Image captions could improve their descriptions and need to use correct punctuation
  • I'd like to see the P/T image moved out of that section and repurposed into the Biography, where it would also fit better
  • The last sentence of the Equipment section really isn't relevant to that section. It should be re-featured elsewhere.
  • BTS:
    • Unsourced
    • Doesn't need to qualify Brian Daley as "late"
    • Appropriate publication dates needed
    • Doesn't need to regurgitate Appearances/Sources list at the end
  • Refs 2 and 7 need appropriate citation templates. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:09, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
• Larry
  • A bit of underlinking
  • Intro could use a pararaph break to accommodate Wikia skin
  • Biography could be subsectioned, which will allow for an additional quote. Image thumbnail sizes could also be enlarged somewhat within the Bio.
  • The second Bio image could do a little better job of cropping off the sliver of border on the left side
  • The second and third sentences of the BTS aren't really necessary. And the last sentence is unsourced.
  • Ref 2 should really use employ the SWE citation template in order to use the backup link, since that page is no longer active
  • The Leland Chee SW.com reference for the 3 ABY date is merely repeating information that comes from Behind the Magic. Why can't this article just source that date to the source itself? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:09, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
• Shredder bat
  • General underlinking
  • Image thumbnails in article body could be enlarged
  • Correct punctuation for image thumbnails
  • "Biology and appearance" looks like it could benefit from subsectioning
  • Referencing needs to eliminate page numbers
  • BTS partially unsourced and can just eliminate the second paragraph unless there's some kind of specific reason any of that needs to be kept. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:35, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
• Exar Kun's lightsaber
  • Most BBY dates are not sourced correctly
  • General underlinking
  • Paragraphs that could probably use breaks include the second intro, the second "Unique design," and the second "Recovery and later usage"
  • The two image captions in "Exar Kun's weapon" are redundant and boring. Would like to see more engaging descriptions used here.
  • No reason why all article body images can't alternate alignment
  • Let's not use that image in the Appearances section. It doesn't look good.
  • Appearances/Sources should be examined for possible scroll box application
  • BTS:
    • Unsourced
    • First paragraph needs to be rewritten to focus on specific first appearances/mentions/whatever the case is with proper publication dates
    • Can remove all sentences regurgitating Appearances/Sources lists
  • Refs 21 and 22 should implement Cite web or something. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:35, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
• Lumiya's lightwhip
  • General underlinking
  • Dating issues:
    • 4 ABY is essentially exclusive to the infobox. It's been pipelinked into the article body, but it should really be used in both places if it's being used in one.
    • Neither of the dates (ABY and GrS) in the infobox's created field are sourced correctly
    • Would definitely recommend double checking to see that 40 ABY can be sourced straight to Betrayal
  • Some of the image placement in the article body is a little awkward. The image in a "A Sith weapon" could be moved into the middle of that section, as could the image in "Later usage" to give the article a more natural, balanced flow and spacing between images. And the BTS can just be aligned right to make it look better.
  • BTS needs to mention full publication date of first appearance and can remove any sentences regurgitating the Appearances/Sources, and not all of that section is sourced
  • The Legacy of the Forces Miniatures thing in the Sources list can presumably cite a specific item with the appropriate citation template
  • Starships & Vehicles 33 should mention a specific section as is done with Fact Files
  • Ref 3 needs to use CSWECite
  • Ref list could probably use a scroll box. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:35, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
• Berooken
  • All of the BBY dates should be checked for referencing accuracy. I know the TOR comic cannot source the infobox date ref; not sure if these items being sourced to Journal work either.
  • General underlinking
  • Biography would benefit from subsectioning, which will allow for an additional quote and image if available. If there is no other available image, the P/T image would work better in the Biography.
  • It would appear that at least a brief Equipment section could be populated. Discussion of his apparel in the P/T is not relevant to that section if it can't explicitly be tied back to his personality.
  • Second P/T paragraph could definitely use a break
  • BTS:
    • Unsourced
    • Needs publication date(s) of first-appearance comic issues
  • Refs 4 and 5 need to use appropriate citation templates. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:09, 20 November 2020 (UTC)

...get a Besnian sausage or something

Expand as needed.

Oh yeah, the Negs, too

Suckers up to the Core Worlds

1. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:15, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
2. Tommy-Macaroni 21:56, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
3. 1358 ^(Talk) 18:45, 21 November 2020 (UTC)

Rim World nerf herders

1. Won't be able to make my first meeting, but will leave notes. MasterFred(talk) 03:55, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
2. Will be at work, notes are below. I humbly accept the title of Nerf Herder. Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:32, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:18, 20 November 2020 (UTC)

Notes

SE

• Kill all the old. Probe all the new, except for Cadomai and Delrakkin, spare them. Anything else, Tope has my vote. Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:32, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

Imp

• Per SE. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:18, 20 November 2020 (UTC)

Fred

• Kill all old. Probe the new except spare Cadomai and Delrakkin. Tommy has my vote. MasterFred(talk) 03:55, 21 November 2020 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• Tommy-Macaroni
• Toprawa and Ralltiir
• Xd1358

Articles stripped of Featured article status

• Aargau/Legends
• Battle of Christophsis/Legends
• Boz Pity/Legends
• Humbarine/Legends
• Intimidator (Executor-class)
• Kolatill
• Moorja/Legends
• New Bakstre
• Xamuel Lennox
• Yanibar

Articles placed on probation

• Berooken
• Cypher Bos
• Darth Bane
• Exar Kun's lightsaber
• Jutka
• Larry
• Lumiya's lightwhip
• Shredder bat
• Tydirium/Legends
• Valarian/Legends

Articles spared from probation

• Cadomai Prime/Legends
• Delrakkin/Legends

Notes

• Fred does paperwork and schedules Meeting 121.
• Log