Wookieepedia:Inq/Mara Jade Skywalker (third review)

Mara Jade Skywalker

Things to do

• Mara's ships and relationships sections need to be WP:LG-ified.
  • I have fixed the ship section. As for relationships, how is that a Layout Guide violation? The Layout Guide deliberately has flexibility in terms of what sections may be included in an article and the CT that led to the character article Layout Guide section made it clear that the Layout Guide is a set of guidelines, not a hard and fast "the article will only include these sections." There is also notable precedent from multiple FA authors (Corran Horn, Gara Petothel, and of course Mara and Jaina Solo are all examples of this) on having a separate relationships section. Precedent exists both ways and I've not found a consensus saying that one way was superior. If a separate section is what the Inquisitorius wants, then the policy needs to be changed (preferably via CT) and/or it needs to be applied universally. If I've missed an Inquisitorius meeting decision or a CT in my search or there's a better explanation, let me know. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 03:09, March 14, 2011 (UTC)
    • Moved to P&T. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 22:23, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
• Wizards.com sources should be merged into main sources list based on posted dates.
  • Agreed and fixed most all of them. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 03:09, March 14, 2011 (UTC)
• Prevalent use of "Mara" throughout the article to be changed to "Jade" or "Jade Skywalker" as appropriate. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 20:24, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
  • Addressed. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 22:22, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
• At Ataru's request, I've posted some of the issues I saw on his talk page. I'll continue where I left off asap and mention anything else I see either here or there. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 20:22, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
  • The grammatical errors in the image captions are gone. The tense errors should be gone as well. So are the parentheses. I can't guarantee perfect writing on this, but it should be significantly better. As for linking, I added a bunch of links, but it'll need AWB run over it. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 22:22, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Removal of FA status

• Placed on probation per Meeting 40.
• Probe extended per Meeting 41.
• Taken to the Redux page per Meeting 42.
• FA status removed on September 22, 2012 following an unsuccessful redux. Menkooroo (talk) 03:14, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Redux review

• Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mara Jade Skywalker (redux review)

Comments

• Holy kriffing choobies, did not see this one on the list. I will fix it this weekend for sure. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 06:00, March 12, 2011 (UTC)
• Not sure if I'm allowed to comment here since I'm not an Inq, but the intro seems waaaay too short compared to all other FAs of equal length and importance.--ID-21 Dolphin ^(Talk) 16:19, March 19, 2011 (UTC)
  • I will take care of that this week. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 04:42, March 28, 2011 (UTC)
    • I believe that the part on her skills should be spread out and split throughout her biography, especially since the thing about her death should be last. Intros are usually almost all biography, not P&T.--ID-21 Dolphin ^(Talk) 20:09, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
      • Addressed. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 22:22, June 18, 2011 (UTC)