Duron Qel-Droma

Things to do

  • Digitize all comic images
  • Not all of the BBY dates appear to be referenced correctly
  • The article is just full of really massive paragraphs that could be reduced in size with breaks
  • The implementation of a greater number of smaller paragraphs will allow for additional images
  • I think the intro is probably way longer than it needs to be. The article body isn't that big. Three Bio subsections probably doesn't warrant an intro of this size.
  • Could probably use an Equipment section
  • BTS should include the author of "Shadows and Light" and can just remove sentences regurgitating the Sources list.

Removal of FA status

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