Wookieepedia:Inq/Dar Keyis

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Dar Keyis

Things to do

  • Biography subsectioning should be added.
  • Equipment section should be added.
  • Image is extremely small; there's also space for another if it can be found.
  • Missing context/linking issues peppered throughout.
  • Uncited BtS.
  • Infobox affiliations field should only list sub-bullets to a maximum depth of one.
  • I think it's better to remove the last sentence about Ackbar in "Early service" and then slip in a mention of Ackbar leading a New Republic task force as part of the very next sentence, in the next section. That way, the article would be more streamlined in its focus on Keyis himself.
  • I'd say the first two sentences of "Battle over Vuultin" should not delve into the intention of the Empire or the New Republic; they're not relevant to the article subject. Rather, they should be shortened to simply focus on the objective of Keyis's mission and the forces involved, i.e. the evacuees and the Imperial evacuation fleet.
  • The image of the funeral is 1) interfering with the P&T header and 2) should be placed below the quote, so I'm not sure if there's enough space for it (if it somehow still manages to fit in, then the full stop in the caption should be removed).
  • BTS hosts some redundant info. I'm afraid there's no space for that image there either. OOM 224 15:07, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Ensure there no are citations to story arcs but instead to individual comic issues. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:17, 30 April 2022 (UTC)

Removal of FA status

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