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Dannl Faytonni/Legends

Things to do

  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • Underlinking throughout
  • 22 BBY date is not referenced correctly
  • I'd like to see a more balanced subsectioning of the Biography. Sticking one little paragraph into the first subsection and the remainder of the Bio in a second doesn't look great.
  • Quote in second subsection needs to use Quote template for two-speakers, not Dialogue
  • Article looks like it could probably use an Equipment section
  • BTS:
    • This section just isn't written well. I'd like to see a more natural organization and flow to the chronological development of the character. Mention his first source first, with appropriate author and publication credits, then go into his film appearance.
    • At least one paragraph break would also be nice to break up and organize the information better.
    • Just align the image right. That always looks better for the BTS.
    • The Clone Wars: Departure should use the SW.com template in the Appearances and referencing
  • Redirect in Sources
  • Format SW.com Databank names correctly.

Removal of FA status

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