Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Izri Dazh

Requested By: Imperators II
Date Requested: 10:19, 14 March 2023 (UTC)
Date Archived: 07:35, 29 June 2023 (UTC)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article that failed review. Please do not modify it.

Izri Dazh

For evidently being dead by the IU point of the second appearance, a mention, is that year clearly in the book itself? Haven't checked it out, and am going off of the fact the article for said book lists The Essential Reader's Companion as a source for the date. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:20, 14 December 2022 (UTC)
- The year is in the book itself. RogueWhistler (talk) 15:09, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
The paragraphs could be split up into smaller ones to be more friendly to the new appearance of the wiki. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:27, 14 March 2023 (UTC)
- How does it look now? RogueWhistler (talk) 15:09, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
Would like to see subsectioning in the body and then another quote, if available. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:59, 24 April 2023 (UTC)

Above I've copied over an outstanding issue from Wookieepedia:AC/Izri Dazh. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:27, 14 March 2023 (UTC)
Marked for probation per 2nd round objection unaddressed.—spookywilloww^talk 14:25, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

~~1 month on probation.—spookywilloww^talk 14:59, 14 May 2023 (UTC)~~ Wrong section, too many of these, ignore.—spookywilloww^talk 15:00, 14 May 2023 (UTC)