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Hantor Loftus

• Requested By: UberSoldat93 (talk)
• Date Requested: 11:31, 9 May 2023 (UTC)
• Date Archived: 02:01, 24 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

• Implement {{SWGcite}}.
  • Fixed Hk 47 (talk) 18:11, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
• Missing {{Gamemechanics}}.
  • Fixed Hk 47 (talk) 18:11, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
• Enlarge thumbnails.
  • Fixed the image sizes Fan26 (Talk) 14:30, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
• Galaxies history can be supplemented with a date.
  • Fixed Hk 47 (talk) 18:11, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
• 12 ABY needs a source.
  • Fixed Hk 47 (talk) 18:11, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Game doesn't support it. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:12, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
      • Hi, the opening crawl says 8 years after Endor. Is it enough? —Unsigned comment by Hk 47 (talk • contribs)
        • Not really, if there's no source providing the ABY date, you need a note explaining how you get to 12 ABY (Endor is 4 ABY per a source, games takes place 8 years later). Here is one example of a source that supports an ABY date. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:13, 11 June 2023 (UTC)
          • Fixed. Hk 47 (talk) 20:17, 19 July 2023 (UTC)
• Much of Personality and traits is just a retelling of his service history. In fact, there is at least one detail not mentioned there; his criticism of Katarn.
• Describe outfit under Equipment.
• Let's see a publishing date for his entry in N.R.I. Reports.
• Another source needed for New Game Enhancements info, can't be the game itself. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:31, 9 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Fixed Hk 47 (talk) 18:11, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
• Last thing: Will be needing pronouns/gender update.—spookywilloww^talk 02:26, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
  • There is nothing else to say. Examining the character in the game identifies him as a Human male. Since the character is never mentioned by other, there is no pronouns. Hk 47 (talk) 20:17, 19 July 2023 (UTC)
    • Thanks. I've added Category:Individuals with unspecified pronouns and the blank pronoun field (always required even if unknown).—spookywilloww^talk 20:21, 19 July 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• Marked for probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywilloww^talk 14:26, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Vote to retain Good status

1. —spookywilloww^talk 20:21, 19 July 2023 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 20:31, 19 July 2023 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 02:00, 24 July 2023 (UTC)

Vote to strip Good status