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Zoochberry/Legends
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:52, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: [Bad Swedish accent] Hello, I am the Besalisk who went up the planet and came down with all the zoochberries, leaving of course, the inhabitants of the planet with no zoochberries, and therefore bestowing the term "selfish" upon myself.
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Support
- [English accent] Pardon me, good Besalisk. Could you spare a zoochberry? DwartiiDelver (talk) 02:53, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
- Everyone knows you can't have zoochberries without bananas! Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:44, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
- Good stuff. Thanks for letting me use my favorite edit summary. JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 04:12, 7 July 2021 (UTC) 
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 11:30, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
Good work on this topic! Imperators II(Talk) 09:19, 6 August 2021 (UTC)- Jedi Prince series really couldn't think of another type of berry....or any food. MasterFred(talk) 07:31, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
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Braha
You good with this?- First thing is fine, I've removed the at the least bit because it's not something normally included in food articles.
Given the size of the article body, I think the intro could be expanded more.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:30, 4 July 2021 (UTC)- Done. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:46, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
Dwartii
Context for the Corellian Run.DwartiiDelver (talk) 17:13, 4 July 2021 (UTC)- Done. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:46, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
Its being a berry is sourced to two different sources between the infobox and body. It doesn't matter which you use, but it should be consistent.History could benefit from some subsectioning, which will make room for another quote.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:27, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
- Both addressed. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:04, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
I'm unable to find info in the body that supports this statement from the intro: "Several idioms also involved the berries and the dishes that used them."UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:29, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
- End of the first paragraph in the second history section mentions the first idiom, and the second one is the microchip in a zooch field part in the next paragraph. Should I be more explicit in describing the latter as an idiom? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 15:00, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- I'm mainly taking issue with "several idioms" when you only mention two examples in the body. Some rewording would be appreciated. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:45, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- I'm mainly taking issue with "several idioms" when you only mention two examples in the body. Some rewording would be appreciated. UberSoldat93
- End of the first paragraph in the second history section mentions the first idiom, and the second one is the microchip in a zooch field part in the next paragraph. Should I be more explicit in describing the latter as an idiom? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 15:00, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
Imp
In Description, you say that "Zoochberries were a type of berry used in dishes throughout the galaxy" and source it to The Lost City of the Jedi, but out of all the zoochberry dish articles you've brought to status, only zoochberry pie is featured in that book. Does the book also explicitly supports that statement? If not, you may need to do some rearrangement or rewording.- I've sourced the main part of that sentence to Dining at Dex's since that's the best source for multiple dishes existing Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:14, 3 August 2021 (UTC)
Same goes for "Zoochberries continued to be used in dishes throughout the galaxy during the Trioculus affair" in History - only zoochberry juice is featured in the work cited. Does the work actually support that statement?- Narrowed the timeframe there. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:14, 3 August 2021 (UTC)
Please provide context for Kessel.Does it say why Trioculus knocked over the flask?Imperators II(Talk) 21:54, 2 August 2021 (UTC)- Both added. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:14, 3 August 2021 (UTC)
Does the rescue attempt of Organa from the Moffship merit an article of its own?- So the only combat that happens is that Han and co knock out some stormtroopers and take their armor, and then end up assassinating Trioculus by replacing Leia with Killer Robo Leia. I'm not certain on whether that's enough for an article, and if so if it should be at "Rescue of Leia Organa" or "Wedding of Trioculus and Leia Organa" Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:08, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
- Alternatively "Assassination of Trioculus" could work. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:15, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
- Sounds like "Rescue of Leia Organa" would work the best here. Imperators II(Talk) 19:05, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
- Created and linked. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:11, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
- Sounds like "Rescue of Leia Organa" would work the best here. Imperators II(Talk) 19:05, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
- Alternatively "Assassination of Trioculus" could work. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:15, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
- So the only combat that happens is that Han and co knock out some stormtroopers and take their armor, and then end up assassinating Trioculus by replacing Leia with Killer Robo Leia. I'm not certain on whether that's enough for an article, and if so if it should be at "Rescue of Leia Organa" or "Wedding of Trioculus and Leia Organa" Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:08, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
I feel like you should explain that this "Jedgar" wasn't really Jedgar. Kind of like here it's explained that Organa wasn't really "Boushh".- Done
Per my Discord question to you, I'd prefer if you noted in the BTS the first mention of zoochberries proper.Imperators II(Talk) 08:17, 4 August 2021 (UTC)- Done. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:08, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:32, 7 August 2021 (UTC)