Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Zepher

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Contents

  • 1 Zepher
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Lew
        • 1.1.2.2 Uber
        • 1.1.2.3 Anil
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Zepher

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:34, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: #NewFavoriteCharacter
  • Date Archived: 04:37, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 452 words (78 introduction, 338 body, 36 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 21:22, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
  2. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:24, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 02:37, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:21, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
  5. Panther436 (talk) 04:35, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • I think it would be worth including a mention of his depot in the intro Lewisr (talk) 19:36, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:05, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
Uber
  • Would like a bit more info on his clothing; his jumpsuit is multi-colored and boots for one.
  • Mediacat missing. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:42, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Both done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:22, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • Do you think Category:Business owners and executives would be appropriate for Zepher since he has his own shop?
    • Sure, added.
  • Same gender objection from 0G-LC and Varna (Andraven).
    • Removed.
  • Could you provide a source for Nash having two moms? I assume it is mentioned in another episode.
    • She refers to her moms plural, so I think it should be good.
      • I might be missing something, but if you are referring to this line, the subtitles render it as singular possessive: "He's a friend of my mom's too!" TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:40, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
        • I was thinking of a later line but turns out Nash only refers to her parents in it, so added a ref.
  • Besides saying that Zepher was "a friend of [her] mom's," Nash also says that Zepher "taught [her] parents everything they know about starship engines" when they first land his repair shop, which is not currently mentioned in the article. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 06:07, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
    • Sure, added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:47, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
  • If the Star Wars: Young Jedi Adventures: Galactic Training game does indeed identify the "big moon" as Dedoon, I think mentioning the moon by name would be a good idea since it's pretty relevant to the article subject. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:40, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Can confirm, added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:18, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:37, 12 August 2023 (UTC)