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Yotts Oren
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:47, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Hopefully something eventually provides the correct spelling of his name in canon, but this will do for now
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Reviewed via IRC. Imperators II(Talk) 14:04, 18 March 2021 (UTC)- JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 21:08, 22 March 2021 (UTC) - Finished review via IRC. Zed42 (talk) 10:44, 10 April 2021 (UTC)
Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:16, 13 April 2021 (UTC)- MasterFred(talk) 04:20, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
- grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 02:48, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
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Zed
I'm unsure, but wouldn't it be more appropriate to use Legends material to source the Nikto pictured on the CCG card as being Klaatu in that continuity?- Changed it to a legends source. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:36, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
"once again misidentified an image of Yotts Oren as Klaatu" I don't know if "once again" is the best wording here, as the previous instance was Klaatu being misidentified as Yotts Oren.Zed42 (talk) 00:21, 10 February 2021 (UTC)- Removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:36, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
The intro identifies all three of the prisoners, but the article body currently does not.- Added to body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:05, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
"Oren was part of a group of guards that traveled on a second Bantha-II cargo skiff piloted by the Skrilling Pote Snitkin and traveling alongside the vehicle carrying the prisoners." The usage of "traveled … and traveling" doesn't quite sound right to me, could you reword this part to avoid the repetition?Zed42 (talk) 03:12, 10 February 2021 (UTC)- Changed one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:05, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
I'm not sure why ref 11 doesn't just use the card trader card with {{SWCT}}.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:43, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
- I'd forgotten that the year a card is added is visible in game. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:05, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
Missing Mediacat.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:34, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:10, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Since we have no ruling on this, do you think the article should include the full release date for the Card Trader , if available?UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:14, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
- Since this kind of comes under video game, I guess not? I'd think that this info also isn't available for most cards, whereas as year is always available in the app. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:41, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
- It's available on the SWCT wiki for this card, which is why I asked. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:43, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
- It's available on the SWCT wiki for this card, which is why I asked. UberSoldat93
- Since this kind of comes under video game, I guess not? I'd think that this info also isn't available for most cards, whereas as year is always available in the app. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:41, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
Is there no filming information available for the skiff scenes? I know that they were filmed in the US.UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:11, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
- To be honest I've generally left out filming information for all of the skiff and sail barge stuff because some was filmed in the desert but a lot seems to have also been pickup shots done in a studio later on, and the sail barge interior was all at a studio as well. Unlike the cantina, it isn't very clear where each different shot was done and so I'm hesitant to add dates and locations this character might not have been involved in. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:31, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
- That's fair. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:09, 18 April 2021 (UTC)
- That's fair. UberSoldat93
- To be honest I've generally left out filming information for all of the skiff and sail barge stuff because some was filmed in the desert but a lot seems to have also been pickup shots done in a studio later on, and the sail barge interior was all at a studio as well. Unlike the cantina, it isn't very clear where each different shot was done and so I'm hesitant to add dates and locations this character might not have been involved in. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:31, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
Grunny
One minor question: is it worth noting in the BTS that the character's scream is an instance of the Wilhelm scream sound effect used throughout Star Wars films?grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 04:50, 6 April 2021 (UTC)- I considered this but honestly wasn't sure how I'd reference it. I'll ask around and see if anyone is aware of a good source. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:37, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
- Yeah, the only status article referencing it is this one: TK-119#Behind the scenes which is just referencing it to the movie, though there'd be at least some third-party news articles or interviews referencing that one. I'm not sure if there'd be a good interview or other source to use for the Yotts Oren one. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 12:12, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
- How does that look? Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:44, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
- Looks good to me. :) grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 02:48, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
- How does that look? Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:44, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
- Yeah, the only status article referencing it is this one: TK-119#Behind the scenes which is just referencing it to the movie, though there'd be at least some third-party news articles or interviews referencing that one. I'm not sure if there'd be a good interview or other source to use for the Yotts Oren one. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 12:12, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
- I considered this but honestly wasn't sure how I'd reference it. I'll ask around and see if anyone is aware of a good source. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:37, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:15, 18 April 2021 (UTC)