- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Yhifar
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 18:48, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Did not expect this one to overshoot 250.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
- UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:28, February 22, 2020 (UTC)
Galaxy Guide 8 has some good stuff. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 15:54, February 24, 2020 (UTC)- Tommy
Macaroni 22:40, February 25, 2020 (UTC) 
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 06:36, February 27, 2020 (UTC)- MasterFredcerique 18:01, February 27, 2020 (UTC)
Object
Toprawa
Two things with this sentence: "Although the planet's atmospheric pressure was crushing in greater depths,[1] the area known as the Gas Vortex provided a bubble of pressure that allowed the construction of settlements, although it was still only comfortable for especially resilient beings."First, please revise to avoid the double use of "although"Secondly, GG8 specifically says the Gas Vortex sustains Humans and aliens. I would like to see this addressed explicitly.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 14:41, February 24, 2020 (UTC)- Fair enough, revised for both points. Imperators II(Talk) 15:42, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
I believe Category:Mining planets should be added.- Ah, well-spotted. Thanks. Imperators II(Talk) 08:54, February 25, 2020 (UTC)
Do you think Senex-Juvex would do better in the region field of the infobox instead of the sector field? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 07:15, February 25, 2020 (UTC)
- On second thought, considering that the Senex-Juvex region comprised the Senex and Juvex sectors, the sector field works. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 08:31, February 25, 2020 (UTC)
- On second thought, considering that the Senex-Juvex region comprised the Senex and Juvex sectors, the sector field works.
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:40, February 29, 2020 (UTC)