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XM-1 Nova Wing

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  1. Nominated. MIS Tau 1(Woosh!) 16:48, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
  2. --Eyrezer 22:06, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
  3. -- AckbarSigdmirableAckbar (It's A Trap!) 17:26, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
  4. Heck, this is probably darn near up to snuff for featured status. jSarek 07:15, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
  5. Pelmarn Da'kari 08:08, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
  6. Good, man. Jediknight19bby (Jedi High Council Chambers!) 17:20, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
  7. What the hell is this doing here? This is FA quality! Thefourdotelipsis 02:19, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
  8. Great job. Green Tentacle (Talk) 16:24, 19 August 2007 (UTC)

Object

  • Looks good but this image needs to be sourced. --Eyrezer 02:29, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
  • Just a few things:
    • Unless the external displays is explicitly mentioned in the game, you should probably clarify the source. I agree that it looks very likely that they are outside the cockpit, but the ref should say it's based on visual inspection and hasn't been stated.
    • The concept of ships having a maximum speed in space seems to be somewhat frowned on with The New Essential Guide to Vehicles and Vessels giving acceleration values instead. The NEGVV also has the A-wing with greater acceleration than the TIE Defender, making it unlikely that the Missile Boat would have greater acceleration than the A-wing. Although all you have to go on is the MGLT bit, it might be wise to downplay and talk of maximum speed or comparison to the A-wing.
    • "The story of the Missile Boat begins with a technophile admiral by the name of Zaarin." is a little too flowery.
    • Some POV, particularly "devious attacks by Zaarin's forces".
    • I'd have to check the game but I think the Vorknyxx was only moved to To-phalion Base after that mission.
    • Source the infobox. Green Tentacle (Talk) 00:23, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
      • objections addressed on the page--MIS Tau 1 01:11, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
        • Reference for visual inspection added--MIS Tau 1 22:33, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

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