Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Watcher Izax

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Watcher Izax

• Nominated by: Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 17:19, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Exceeded CAN by a bit

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 11:05, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
2. Nothing from me, good work. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:55, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:04, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 17:02, 21 June 2021 (UTC)
5. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:57, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• There's room enough in the body for a related image, perhaps of Cap'n Frem or a generic pic of the Knights. Fan26 (Talk) 02:16, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Added my boy Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 04:50, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
• Vaylin's festival should be dated. Fan26 (Talk) 13:27, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
  • I thought the first date ref implied the date of the festival but I've added another date ref to make it more clear. Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 18:33, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Oof, sorry for taking over a month to strike this. Fan26 (Talk) 17:16, 8 June 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• His skills as a spy can go into a separate "Skills and abilities" section. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:46, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
  • I've split it off. Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 04:34, 6 April 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• I've got to say I'm very pleased to see a nom with the Eternal Empire infobox and with information from ambient conversation. Regarding the latter, however, you should be using the TORcite format here.
• "Many years prior to 3630 BBY" is not supported by the ref note since the ref doesn't use the word "many."
• "He got his code name from the god Izax" this cannot sourced to the Codex entry for the Zakuulan gods, and I'm thinking that this might be speculation. It would be better if you can word it to the effect of: "He shared his codename with the god Izax"
• "on the planet Zakuul" could use some context here to point out to readers unfamiliar with TOR that Zakuul was the capital of the Eternal Empire. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 07:28, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
  • We were really lacking in the KOTFE+ department so I decided to do something about it :). I've added the changes as well. Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 08:50, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
• "sleeper agent" is intro-exclusive OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 09:19, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
  • And done. Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 09:41, 11 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:57, 21 June 2021 (UTC)