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Val

  • Nominated by: Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 08:54, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:First Deceived nomination. Great book, if you're at all interested in the TOR era.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Hmm, where can I download Deceived... Nice work. 1358 (Talk) 20:14, April 4, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 22:57, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Assuming you'll take care of that redlink, nice job Trayus. Kilson Likes PIE(The Bakery) 03:24, April 6, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Imperators II(Talk) 21:39, April 8, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote—Tommy 9281 Saturday, April 9, 2011, 20:55 UTC

Object

Ecks Dee
  • "Val's time with Korr was limited, as he served a commando" Just to make sure, shouldn't that be "serves *as* a commando"?
    • Haha yeah. Serving a commando is a much less glamorous job, I would imagine.
  • "Val was a Human female[2] alive around 3681 BBY.[3] She was the sister to Natala Yooms and eventually met and fell in love with Zeerid Korr. Korr was a member of the Galactic Republic's Army and served as a commando and pilot for the Special Forces' division known as Havoc Squad." The fact that she is the sister of Natala should probably be merged with the first sentence, leaving the Korr stuff in a separate sentence. 1358 (Talk) 19:59, April 4, 2011 (UTC)
Imperators II
  • Deceived identifies Zeerid's commando unit as Havoc SquadRON, therefore it should be changed accordingly.
    • Changed, but in the future, please remember that for small objections like this you are free to make the alteration yourself as a Sofixit.
  • Which source states that Havoc Squadron is part of the Republic Special Forces? Zeerid only mentions being part of the Republic Army.
    • It's identified as such in the Hope synopsis - I've sourced it to that.
  • Ummm...since the Great Galactic War lasted for 28 years, the fact that Val lived during the war doesn't necessarily mean she was alive by 3681 BBY.
    • Notice that the article states "around" and not "by" or "in."
  • Since Arra is stated to be 9 years old, 3662 BBY should be linked to from the article. Imperators II(Talk) 20:45, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

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