Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Urch

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Urch

• Nominated by: Samonic ^(Talk) 19:02, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 09:10, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST WP:CHISS WP:NOVELS

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 13:46, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 19:34, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
3. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 10:58, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
4. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:38, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 (he/him) 09:10, 16 February 2023 (UTC)

Object

The Ziara Dimension

• subjugated the Tower Dimension id reccomend adding "in an attempt to encricle and eventually conquer the chiss ascendancy" after that bit in the intro.
  • I don't really think that should be in the intro. It's not that relevant to Urch itself, so I'm only mentioning it in the body. Samonic ^(Talk) 20:17, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
• mention that Ilparg was invited under the guise of sending a new ambassador to Urch in the intro
  • See my reply to your first objection. Samonic ^(Talk) 20:17, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
    • ill have to insist on this one for the intro. currently it reads as "the Nikardun wantsd to capture a Chiss warship, so they invited Ilparg". theres no indication that it was a trap until later. judt mentioning "invited Ilparg as bait in hopes of ..." should suffice for the intro. BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 21:28, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
      • That works, thanks. Samonic ^(Talk) 21:45, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
      • Objection(s) overridden by AgriCorps 16:37, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
• Around 19 BBY,[2] the Tower Dimension was subjugated by the Nikardun Destiny, the hegemony of the Nikardun species, as it was one of the nations that encircled the Ascendancy, which the Nikardun sought to destroy. - would you mind rewording this slightly? i feel that theres too many clauses. BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 19:32, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Reworded. Samonic ^(Talk) 20:17, 25 January 2023 (UTC)

Thrawn

• "Urch was the homeworld of the Urchiv-ki sentient species and the capital of their nation, the Tower Dimension, which had a treaty with the Ascendancy that allowed diplomatic meetings and relations." I feel this would be better in "description" instead of "history". ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 22:33, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
  • That's not what that section is for. See WP:LG/IU. Samonic ^(Talk) 07:33, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:10, 16 February 2023 (UTC)