Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unification Wars (Galactic Republic) (fourth nomination)

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Unification Wars (Galactic Republic)

Nominated by: Jace Onasi (talk) 04:44, September 30, 2018 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Hopefully this is the last time I need to nominate this...

~~Looking at the article again, I'd propose that instead of the Jedi image you use one depicting the Rakata or the Infinite Empire. That would be a better fit for the Prelude section, as well.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 13:31, September 30, 2018 (UTC)
- Good call.--Jace Onasi (talk) 07:32, October 1, 2018 (UTC)
I'm not so sure that the reasoning behind the mention of Xim's wars is sound. For that conflict, we have a hard end date, but we don't know a starting date for the Unification Wars, so the two theoretically may have overlapped. I recommend you look into this instead and see if it should/can be added to the "prev" field. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:00, October 1, 2018 (UTC)
- Corrected.--Jace Onasi (talk) 06:05, October 3, 2018 (UTC)
  - That's not exactly what I had in mind, given that the reasoning for mentioning the Rakatan Civil War in the current revision is not actually any different from that of Xim wars in the previous revision. That is to say, if we look purely at the dates, then again both of the events could theoretically have occurred simultaneously. In this case, I think you need to rely in the ref note on connecting in prose what you're sourcing to NEC in the Prelude section to what's sourced to CSWE in "The wars" section. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:53, October 8, 2018 (UTC)

Since you are linking to a disambiguation page anyway, I think {{Otheruses}} will look more tidy than {{Youmay}}
I realize that we usually don't provide context for the Galactic Republic, but I feel that in this case it is warranted to establish that the Republic was a form of galactic government. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 07:03, October 8, 2018 (UTC)

I must once again apologise for stretching this out into so many nominations. Other commitments mean that I can't always tend to my nominations.--Jace Onasi (talk) 04:44, September 30, 2018 (UTC)
The image of the Jedi is still an issue, as it isn't time-period appropriate, especially since they wield lightsabers. I don't believe there are any suitable images of Jedi from the period, however. You can find the ones suggested in this nomination. If you think I should use one of those images, or any other image, bring that up in your objection.--Jace Onasi (talk) 04:44, September 30, 2018 (UTC)
Here's a link to the previous nomination.--Jace Onasi (talk) 04:44, September 30, 2018 (UTC)

Unaddressed objections more than ten days old. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:23, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:03, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
I also have other commitments. Including reviewing nominations with committed nominators. 1358 ^(Talk) 18:14, October 18, 2018 (UTC)