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Unidentified refugee camp
- Nominated by: Dropbearemma (she/her) 06:00, 26 June 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I continue to only write uselessly obscure articles. This one is from p. 41 of The Truce at Bakura Sourcebook.
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Support
- Samonic
08:00, 21 July 2022 (UTC) 
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 13:13, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:09, 14 August 2022 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 14:54, 19 August 2022 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 09:33, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
Object
The one who writes useless Kilji articles
- (Review note) You aren't the only one who writes useless articles :P I only do useless articles.
Could you tell some of the camp's history in the introduction, please?- BTS: The "first mentioned" is unnecessary as the refugee camp was only mentioned once.
"on Virgillia's forested moon": this article title is conjectural, please reword it. (Something like "the planet Virgillia's moon…")Samonic 09:22, 26 June 2022 (UTC)
- Hmm I'm not entirely sure how to add more of the camp's history, as it basically doesn't have any? We don't even know whether they're refugees from the Virgillian Civil War or the Galactic Civil War. Other than that, I'ved fixed your other two objections. Dropbearemma (she/her) 09:43, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
Is the attack on the camp notable enough for an article? I'd say so.Samonic 10:14, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
- Hmm I'm not entirely sure how to add more of the camp's history, as it basically doesn't have any? We don't even know whether they're refugees from the Virgillian Civil War or the Galactic Civil War. Other than that, I'ved fixed your other two objections. Dropbearemma (she/her) 09:43, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
History: Can you say something like "at some point, the refugees built the camp..."Samonic 16:38, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Surely you can add a little more to the intro.UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:03, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
- How's that? Unfortunately, the source I'm working with is less than 340 words long. Dropbearemma (she/her) 05:58, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
Fan
I'd say link to Imperial officer/Legends in the final sentence of the intro rather than just Officer/LegendsInformant is currently a redirect to the canon Information broker page while Information broker/Legends lists "informant" as an alternative name. I'd say pipelink to the legends broker page through informant in the "History" section.Fan26 (Talk) 19:34, 9 August 2022 (UTC)- How's that? Dropbearemma (she/her) 07:30, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:33, 2 September 2022 (UTC)