Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Czerka staffer

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Contents

  • 1 Unidentified Czerka staffer
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 RattsT
        • 1.1.2.2 Toprawa
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Unidentified Czerka staffer

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 21:01, June 7, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:05, June 13, 2020 (UTC)
  2. RattsT (talk) 05:01, June 15, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:48, June 29, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Tommy-Macaroni 18:37, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 14:23, July 2, 2020 (UTC)

Object

RattsT
  • Can context be added for the plasma bomb attack? Who/where did it come from?
    • It's never stated/hinted at where it came from, or who it was ordered by. It just happened randomly as the Jedi were going to meet Averross, and not touched on much after it happened.—spookywillowwtalk 19:04, June 9, 2020 (UTC)
  • Does the book capitalize "Lord Regent?" Most of the article does but the quote in the P&T does not. You should be consistent with it.
    • 14 of the 29 mentions of term are 'Lord Regent', while the other 15 are 'lord regent'. 'Lord Regent' is the more formal term that his court addresses him by when putting his name next to it, which makes up the only times it is used in this article. I've deferred to use the capitalized version on a recent FA, and would prefer to keep it as is, despite the quote being what it is.—spookywillowwtalk 19:04, June 9, 2020 (UTC)
  • If one exists, a quote about the protocol/medical droids could be added to the Equipment section. RattsT (talk) 23:18, June 8, 2020 (UTC)
    • Added.—spookywillowwtalk 19:04, June 9, 2020 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Since it appears that "Lord Regent" is not capitalized in every instance, judging from the P/T quote, I'm not sure if any of the instances of that term need to be capitalized in this article. In accordance with our rank capitalization policy, it only needs to be capitalized if it immediately precedes the individual, such as "Lord Regent Rael Averross." Does the source treat this any differently? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 12:06, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
    • The source is inconsistent about it. While there's instances like the one in the article of it not being capitalized, there are also ones that are, despite his name not coming right before. Some of these include "That prompts the question, Lord Regent—if a Jedi can solve this problem so simply, why haven’t you handled it?" and "Never heard Deren call him anything but Lord Regent." The novel is almost exactly split in half with it's usage, 14/29 for "Lord Regent" and 15/29 for "lord regent".—spookywillowwtalk 14:29, June 24, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:23, July 2, 2020 (UTC)