Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tuz

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Tuz

Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 19:59, June 15, 2011 (UTC)
Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 02:36, June 16, 2011 (UTC)
CC7567 ^(talk) 21:13, June 16, 2011 (UTC)
1358 ^(Talk) 19:10, June 19, 2011 (UTC)
Someone needs to draw this guy. I'd like to see a fat Mon Cal. Looks like I shall be getting out my references and drawing one some day... Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 07:28, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Any articles for the capture of the Sidral II or the attack on the Imperial repair dock? (I hate to leave these objections when the rest of the article is fine, but someone has to be the bad guy. :p)
- One created, one redlinked. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 19:58, June 15, 2011 (UTC)
Good work. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 23:04, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

"Tuz was contacted by Ackbar, who used his considerable leverage over the pirate to persuade him, reluctantly, to assist the Rebel Alliance": this is really minor, but the arrangement of the sentence implies that Ackbar is the one who's reluctant to persuade Tuz to join the Alliance, though I'm not sure if this is correct since it's a little unclear. Please clarify. CC7567 ^(talk) 00:06, June 16, 2011 (UTC)
- Try that. By the way, per the discussion below, it really is a first appearance rather than a first mention. Having read through the layout guide, I've changed it to (First appearance) (Vignette) since this seems most appropriate. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 19:28, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:33, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

You list X-wing: The Official Strategy Guide as Tuz's (First appearance). However, it's listed under Sources, so shouldn't it be listed (First mentioned)? I'm not familiar with the source material, so that's why I asked. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 03:53, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
- Farlander's story is told as a first person narrative so I've always gone with appearance rather than mention. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 19:22, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
  - Could I see a few examples of where you've done this in the past? Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 02:43, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
    - Wex Dafid and S'man. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 16:21, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
      - If previous promoted articles have had it that way, then I'll support once Tranner's objection is addressed. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 04:17, June 15, 2011 (UTC)