Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Trax Bonkik

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Trax Bonkik

  • Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:07, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 12:42, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
  2. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 16:16, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
  3. Dentface (talk) 06:02, 31 May 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:38, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:21, 22 June 2022 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • The intro is longer than half of the Biography. Even FAs have shorter intros by comparison. Please trim the fat. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:08, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Hopefully I fixed now. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:10, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Personally, I think all the important details can be summarized in a single paragraph. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:48, 17 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Are "Podrace" and "Podracer" supposed to be capitalized like that?
  • Would like the date reference converted into a note mentioning the podrace.
    • Podrace/Podracer capitalized per the source. Fixed date note. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:17, 17 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Copy-edit. Made some presentation changes, hope you're okay with them. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:11, 17 May 2022 (UTC)
Luca
  • Context for Rodia is missing.
  • It is unclear to me, if Pagalies later freed the two brothers.
    • Resolved via Discord. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 16:16, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Please, make sure to be ok with my copy-edit and nice work! LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 14:17, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Rodia context added. Source material doesn't specify anything beyond what I ended the article with. Copy-edit is ok for me. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:15, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Intro: I wouldn't use the wording about a slave working for their master seeing as it's not their choice.
  • Bts needs to mention the Databank in relation to WTS. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:05, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • I'm not seeing how Sharpe's real name or the 2005 date can be referenced to the databank entry. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:26, 21 June 2022 (UTC)
    • 2005 date referenced. A quick search shows nothing for Ashley Sharpe linked to either of the screen names. Page move done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:49, 21 June 2022 (UTC)

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