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Toos

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:53, November 12, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Nominations are always better when they come in Toos.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. I could vote just for the pun. Good article! - Tommuskq Imperial Emblem (TAKE A SEAT) 21:06, November 13, 2017 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Awesome. "How are you?" Imperators II(Talk) 10:57, January 6, 2018 (UTC)
  3. Nice work --Lewisr (talk) 19:55, January 24, 2018 (UTC)
  4. Jinzler (talk) 20:19, January 24, 2018 (UTC)
  5. Great work--Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:52, January 28, 2018 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:00, February 16, 2018 (UTC)
  7. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 20:47, February 16, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Imperators-Too
  • "human" in intro.
    • Ah, a relic of an assumption. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:33, January 6, 2018 (UTC)
  • Can you please confirm for me that Poul was asking why bay 329 was causing a delay, not bay 327? (The latter would make more sense in the context of Slallen's explanation that they could not yet clear the dock, and it would be less at odds with the intro sentence "[...] Poul demanded they have the bay cleared.")
    • It should be 327, corrected. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:33, January 6, 2018 (UTC)
  • Have you considered swapping the Death Star image for something slightly more relevant, say, an image of Detention Block AA-23?
    • How's it look now?
  • "while peering at this monitor" — I'm not sure whether this should be "the monitor" or "that monitor," but it can't be "this monitor," as that doesn't sit well with our past tense requirement.
  • Also, should there be a canon equivalent for this?
    • I question whether we really need either a legends or canon article for that, but made. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:33, January 6, 2018 (UTC)
  • From the quote it would appear that it was Slallen, not Toos, who reported that sensors were down in AA-23. (This concerns both the body and intro.)
  • The body and the intro directly contradict each other on who commanded Toos to contact AA-23.
  • Is "comm" synonymous with "comms"? You use one in the article text but the other in image caption.
    • They both seem to be used by various sources, but I've changed it to "the comm" for consistency here. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:33, January 6, 2018 (UTC)
  • "then appeared for the first time in the short story" — this phrasing conflicts with the {{1st}} tag in Appearances. Instead, it should specify that he was named in the story.
  • I don't suppose there's any info on who voiced the guy in ANH? Imperators II(Talk) 16:19, January 4, 2018 (UTC)
Jinzler
  • In the introduction if could be beneficial if you could provide some reference to the timeframe that events described occurred in, for example noting that they took place in 0 BBY. Jinzler (talk) 22:50, January 17, 2018 (UTC)
Lewisr
  • Comm unit links to a legends page, not sure if you want to create the canon version of remove the link altogether, I'll leave that up to you. --Lewisr (talk) 19:15, January 24, 2018 (UTC)
    • Well noticed! I've created and linked to a stub. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:50, January 24, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:47, February 16, 2018 (UTC)