Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/The Brief Reign of Future Wraiths

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The Brief Reign of Future Wraiths

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:21, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Little known fact: The Phantom of the Opera was the original title of Cloak of Deception
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Support

1. Great work! As a note, I uploaded a clearer version of the image on the article. Dentface (talk) 07:46, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:58, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 08:44, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:10, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:17, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• Right, that image is gonna have to be a big no from me. It depicts a different opera and thus can be very confusing to the reader (it was very confusing to me). If you had, like, an exterior shot of the Coruscant Opera or a neutral shot of its interior, I'd be completely fine with that, but this, alas, no. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:26, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Fair point, switched it to one of Coruscant. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:09, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
• Context for Adegan crystals, please.
  • Done, there's another section in Cloak of Deception that it can be sourced to.
• Was Sei Taria Valorum's only known aide? If so, her name should go inside commas.
  • Done
• "more questions about his political ideals" — this refers to Palpatine's ideals, not Valorum's, right? Could you clarify? Imperators II^(Talk) 14:00, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Is writing "his own" enough? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:35, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
• Since that Fact File page doesn't explicitly mention Palpatine, you should amend the referencing of the last BTS sentence. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:44, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:04, 28 August 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• BTS says the subject was first mentioned, while Appearances says it's a full appearance. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:43, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
  • The opera isn't visibly performed in the book so I've changed the appearances to mentions Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 04:19, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:17, 3 September 2021 (UTC)