Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tanallay Surge complex

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Tanallay Surge complex

• Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 12:48, March 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: CA that went large!

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:19, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
2. 1358 ^(Talk) 16:11, May 16, 2020 (UTC)
3. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:18, May 16, 2020 (UTC)
4. Tommy-Macaroni 20:48, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
5. 01miki10 ^{Open comlink} 20:53, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• As per GAN Rule 15, article needs to be formatted with an introduction. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:51, March 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Oh! Of course. Working on it. OtterSurf (talk) 13:15, March 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 13:23, March 16, 2020 (UTC)
• "The Yuuzhan Vong force, led by Supreme Commander Nas Choka and Commander Malik Carr, had no intentions of meeting with them, however; they proceeded to begin the biological engineering of Tynna's oceans, releasing a chemical from their dropships to optimize the water for the cultivation of biots such as dovin basals for use in their further conquest of the galaxy." This can be cut down into two sentences. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:59, March 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 14:10, March 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Much of the History doesn't seem to involve the complex itself, especially the last sentence. How prevalent is the structure in the novel? UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:48, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • It features briefly in one scene observed remotely by Talon Karrde, Belindi Kalenda, Showalter and an unnamed extra. I've just tried to be as comprehensive as possible. OtterSurf (talk) 13:25, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
    • Then you're gonna have to remove extrapolated info that doesn't relate to the complex directly. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:33, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
      • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 18:08, April 13, 2020 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• The Tynnan government needs an article and I think the chemical might also deserve one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:10, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 18:52, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
• Since you mention the New Republic in the quote caption I really think you should mention them in the body and give some context as to how their involved. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:10, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. OtterSurf (talk) 18:33, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
• Looking at the book, I think you can say the Yuuzhan Vong made planetfall after battling Tynian forces above the planet since it currently sounds like they faced no resistance at all. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:44, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. OtterSurf (talk) 20:14, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
• You can modify the New Republic bit to say that the events at the complex were broadcast to every city on Tynna and also viewed by Intelligence agents observing the battle from a stealth ship. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:44, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 20:13, May 13, 2020 (UTC)

Tommy

• Have you checked to make sure this doesn't appear in the regular audiobook of Jedi Eclipse? Tommy-Macaroni 19:59, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • I asked Anil to check both audiobooks for the CA nom; he was only able to find it in the unabridged version. See the CA nom for the details. OtterSurf (talk) 20:19, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
    • I couldn't find any details about that on the CAN but whatever, I trust that if Anil couldn't find it then it's not there. Tommy-Macaroni 20:48, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:55, May 17, 2020 (UTC)