- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
TX-130 Saber-class fighter tank
- Nominated by: CommanderDeviss327
- Nomination comments: I nominated this several months back, but then my computer broke and I hate editing on a phone so I really just gave up. So I've come back and I intend to finish this.
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UberSoldat
- The outstanding objections from the previous nomination are still unaddressed. UberSoldat93
(talk) 20:28, September 4, 2020 (UTC)
- I have done all of them, except for the images one. I cannot change the names of the images.--CommanderDeviss327(talk) 2:06, September 10, 2020 (UTC)
- You have to replace spaces in filenames with underscores, like this [[File:Name of file.jpg]] --> [[File:Name_of_file.jpg]]. You also have to correct your image caption punctuation and format the layout properly. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:44, September 10, 2020 (UTC)
- The image captions have been fixed.--CommanderDeviss327
AЧ dAwu I qɹokǝ ɹǝฉ1iʇʎ ฉБa1u 22:39, September 10, 2020 (UTC)
- Still not fixed, only complete sentences should get full stops. See the Layout Guide for more information. UberSoldat93
(talk) 07:40, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
- Check your image layout too and make sure the adjustments are in the correct order. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:44, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
- Check your image layout too and make sure the adjustments are in the correct order. UberSoldat93
- Still not fixed, only complete sentences should get full stops. See the Layout Guide for more information. UberSoldat93
- The image captions have been fixed.--CommanderDeviss327
- You have to replace spaces in filenames with underscores, like this [[File:Name of file.jpg]] --> [[File:Name_of_file.jpg]]. You also have to correct your image caption punctuation and format the layout properly. UberSoldat93
- I have done all of them, except for the images one. I cannot change the names of the images.--CommanderDeviss327(talk) 2:06, September 10, 2020 (UTC)
- The references to the Star Wars: Legion set need to be changed. You have to reference the individual cards within the set, not the whole Expansion Pack. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:40, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
Fan26
I'm going to object to the use of the word 'heavily' in the last sentence of the intro as it feels a bit opinionated, regardless of the tank's large amount of weaponry.Fan26 (Talk) 13:56, September 7, 2020 (UTC)- This has been fixed--CommanderDeviss327(talk) 2:06, September 10, 2020 (UTC)
Vitus
The image from Battlefront II in the role section should be removed or moved to the Behind the scenes section as that image is a screenshot of a multiplayer match on Naboo, which is not considered canon by any measure, even if it is an official image.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:48, September 7, 2020 (UTC)- This has also been fixed.--CommanderDeviss327(talk) 2:06, September 10, 2020 (UTC)
I think that the first image can be slightly smaller so that the text isn't too squeezed, and the following images have to be switched to the other side.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:53, September 11, 2020 (UTC)- I have fixed the images.--CommanderDeviss327AЧ dAwu I qɹokǝ ɹǝฉ1iʇʎ ฉБa1u 22:40, September 10, 2020 (UTC)
- I have fixed the images.--CommanderDeviss327
Comments
Vote to remove nomination (AC only)
- Unaddressed objections from Shayanomer over 10 days old. Tommy-Macaroni 15:55, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 15:58, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
- Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:02, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
