Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/TX-130 Saber-class fighter tank

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

TX-130 Saber-class fighter tank

• Nominated by: ~~~~CommanderDeviss327(talk)
• Nomination comments:

(0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total)

Support

Object

Vitus

• You don't need the information of the LEGO set in the BTS. That can be added to the sources section and the image can be removed. See All Terrain Heavy Scout.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:19, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • LEGO information in the BTS hasn't been removed.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 06:06, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
    • Sorry. Is this it?--CommanderDeviss327(talk)9:40, April 15, 2020
• The Where are those droidekas update needs to be properly formatted, with an external links section and archived link. See 41st Scout Battalion.
  • Fixed--CommanderDeviss327(talk)16:45, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
• .The June 26 date cannot be sourced to the game.
• Similarly to my first objection, you can remove the TX-130 Saber-class Fighter Tank Unit Expansion as it is not necessary.
• The BTS needs to go in chronological order. The tank was first mentioned in Knights of Fate and then appeared in Star Wars Battlefront II. You need to rearrange the BTS to make that clear.
• Author should be included for Boba Fett: Crossfire
• Star Wars Legends needs to be properly formatted as Star Wars Legends--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:32, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • Is it good now?--CommanderDeviss327(talk)1:34, April 15, 2020
• Battlefront II forum citation needs to use {{Cite web}}. The version in External links is fine the way it is.
• You can remove the hyperlink on "Where are those droidekas?" and just have the title of the update using quotation marks and proper format of a title that adds capitalization.
  • Fixed--CommanderDeviss327(talk)9:39, April 15, 2020
• The second paragraph in the Description heading can be split up. The now third paragraph should be joined with the final paragraph of the section.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 06:06, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed as well--CommanderDeviss327(talk)9:39, April 15, 2020

UberSoldat

• A better version of the Star Wars: Legion image can be found here, and should be uploaded to replace the current one. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:59, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Sorry about the bad image.--CommanderDeviss327(talk)9:41, April 15, 2020
    • I've decided to reupload the image to explain a few things. You can acquire images from a website without having to screenshot it using Chrome's "Inspect" function. Just copy the URL of the image and paste it in a new tab, then download it. Ideally, you should crop out the watermark as well. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:49, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
      • Sorry. I became part of a botnet a couple of years ago by downloading an image off the web. I just automatically take screenshots. --CommanderDeviss327(talk)14:50, April 15, 2020
• You've got a few redirecting links. Have you enabled "Highlight all redirects orange" in your preferences? UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:52, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed them--CommanderDeviss327(talk)14:51, April 15, 2020
• There are duplicate links in the article body. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:57, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • I could only find one, if there are any more please point them out.--CommanderDeviss327(talk)1:31, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
    • I don't seem to see any more. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:55, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
• I would combine the last two sentences in the History into a single sentence. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:55, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done --CommanderDeviss327(talk)13:23, April 16, 2020(UTC)

Tommy

• Preliminary objections:
  • This is in Pages with missing permanent archival links.
  • Intro needs to be bigger for an article of this length.
  • Images with spaces in their file names need to use underscores instead.
  • The same applies to templates with spaces in their names.
  • Please correct image caption punctuation.
  • For images, the correct layout is [[File:example.jpg|thumb|right or left|size|caption]]. Please correct this. Also, please do not use 283x283px as a size. Just use 280px or something.
  • Was the tank also first pictured in the Legends novel mentioned?
  • Per precedent, you should discuss any unlock requirements and in-game cost of the tank in Battlefront II. Tommy Macaroni 11:43, April 26, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

If you want people to actually see this nomination, you need to add it to Wookieepedia:Good article nominations. MasterFredcerique 05:33, April 15, 2020 (UTC)

• Isn't it already in it?--CommanderDeviss327(talk)9:41, April 15, 2020(UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

1. Unaddressed objections from me over 10 days old. Tommy-Macaroni 12:13, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:14, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:14, May 6, 2020 (UTC)