Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Spy ray

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Spy ray

  • Nominated by: Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 22:53, January 16, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Lost Suns was actually a pretty good comic.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:27, January 18, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:54, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Did a copy-edit. Trak Nar Ramble on 05:16, January 31, 2013 (UTC)
  4. —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 23:29, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:18, February 16, 2013 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:19, February 19, 2013 (UTC)
  7. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 02:27, February 21, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Floyd has one thing
  • Can we get an article for the planet that they set up the spy ray on? IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:24, January 21, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I'm kind of unsure about the use of the "viewfinder" comparison, considering, AFAIK, there is no literal canon equivalent in SW. This seems to be drawing a comparison to OOU, real-world technology that may not be appropriate. Does the source use this terminology? If not, I would probably recommend trying to reword this somehow. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:56, February 19, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:29, February 21, 2013 (UTC)


  • I'm not going to object towards your decision, but I think it would be best that you deleted the part about the weapon's maker playing a major role in the TOR videogame and respective classes, it is considerably irrelevant. However, feel free to add some of that context related to the inventor in the body. Winterz (talk) 17:37, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
    • Personally, I think it's entirely relevant, as The Lost Suns's secondary purpose was to introduce the characters and political situation of the game. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 15:45, February 14, 2013 (UTC)
      • Yeah, like you said "the characters". This article is about a device. It's fine to go and say that its inventor was later portrayed in the game but then you begin to contextualize his role in the videogame and that is completely irrelevant to the Spy ray. Winterz (talk) 15:58, February 14, 2013 (UTC)