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Snoke's ring
- Nominated by: DwartiiDelver (talk) 00:32, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: More Dwartii!
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Support
- OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 09:57, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
- JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 20:56, 22 March 2021 (UTC) 
Imperators II(Talk) 10:38, 24 March 2021 (UTC)- Tommy-Macaroni 22:04, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
Insert LOTR reference. 1358 (Talk) 19:42, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
Object
Amino
Higher quality infobox image needed.Mr Star Wars Amino Republic (talk) 00:51, February 2, 2021 (UTC)- I'm afraid that's the highest quality version that can be extracted from the digital version of the TLJ VD. I suppose I could try and get a scan of it from the physical book, though I'm not sure how much higher the quality would be there (additionally, I don't currently own the physical version, so I'd need to either see if someone else can get a scan or try and get a hold of the book and scan it myself). DwartiiDelver (talk) 05:01, 3 February 2021 (UTC)
- You can cut the image so that it focuses more on the ring itself. Mr Star Wars Amino Republic (talk) 22:23, February 11, 2021 (UTC)
- Sorry for the late reply—started a new job recently so I've been busy with that. I think you saw me on Discord asking about someone scanning the ring in the physical book. Fred got back to me about that and, unfortunately, said that the scan is even lower quality than the existing image. As for that current image, I'm afraid it's already at the smallest dimensions possible (250px wide) before it no longer properly fits the infobox. DwartiiDelver (talk) 23:02, 16 February 2021 (UTC)
- Alright. I'm sorry. Sorry for the extremely late response and the objection Mr Star Wars Amino Republic (talk) 08:21, March 6, 2021 (UTC)
- No worries. Yeah, it'd be nice if there was a higher quality image of the ring available, but it seems this is as good as it gets for now. DwartiiDelver (talk) 15:08, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
- Alright. I'm sorry. Sorry for the extremely late response and the objection Mr Star Wars Amino Republic (talk) 08:21, March 6, 2021 (UTC)
- Sorry for the late reply—started a new job recently so I've been busy with that. I think you saw me on Discord asking about someone scanning the ring in the physical book. Fred got back to me about that and, unfortunately, said that the scan is even lower quality than the existing image. As for that current image, I'm afraid it's already at the smallest dimensions possible (250px wide) before it no longer properly fits the infobox. DwartiiDelver (talk) 23:02, 16 February 2021 (UTC)
- You can cut the image so that it focuses more on the ring itself. Mr Star Wars Amino Republic (talk) 22:23, February 11, 2021 (UTC)
- I'm afraid that's the highest quality version that can be extracted from the digital version of the TLJ VD. I suppose I could try and get a scan of it from the physical book, though I'm not sure how much higher the quality would be there (additionally, I don't currently own the physical version, so I'd need to either see if someone else can get a scan or try and get a hold of the book and scan it myself). DwartiiDelver (talk) 05:01, 3 February 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
Can we get a little more context for the den of antiques?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:26, 23 February 2021 (UTC)
- How does that look? DwartiiDelver (talk) 16:41, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
OOM
Image captions should end with a full stop (also known—albeit incorrectly—as a 'period' :P) if it's a full sentence.- Added.
The date note for TLJ can just be replaced with the first date note for the ring.- Replaced.
Is the concept artist the costume concept artist for TLJ, or just one amongst a number? I used "a" in my copy-edit.OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 13:47, 7 March 2021 (UTC)- I believe Rowley is the only one listed in the art book, however upon checking the film's credits there are a few others listed, so it was fine to add "a" there. DwartiiDelver (talk) 15:23, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
Since "attack on the Resistance fleet" is conjectural, the pipelink to that page should only cover the word "attack."OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 18:21, 7 March 2021 (UTC)- Fixed. On another note, my main intent with that reference to A Crash of Fate in the final sentence of the History section was to cite the Den of Antiquities being a shop in-universe, as I wasn't sure that could be ascertained from just the park. DwartiiDelver (talk) 19:01, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Have you checked The Last Jedi trailers and promotional material for any appearances of the ring?UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:03, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
- Re-checked everything and added two more sources. DwartiiDelver (talk) 14:43, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
Ayrehead
The Star Wars Book is generally the preferred source for dating Galaxy's Edge since it's a published work. See Edmo Ectacle or Brookish Boon.Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:01, 27 March 2021 (UTC)- Thanks, updated.
I think you can include the name of the concept art piece in the BTS.Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:01, 27 March 2021 (UTC)- Added. By the way, thanks for removing the background of the Snoke's ring image! DwartiiDelver (talk) 16:53, 27 March 2021 (UTC)
- No problem! Always happy to help with a movie nom. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:04, 27 March 2021 (UTC)
- Added. By the way, thanks for removing the background of the Snoke's ring image! DwartiiDelver (talk) 16:53, 27 March 2021 (UTC)
Ecks
The events of TFA take place in 34 ABY, according to Galactic Atlas, and the events of TLJ take place directly after. Just based on that, it's possible that the events of TFA took place in late 34 ABY and the events of TLJ in early 35 ABY. There are other sources that place the events of TLJ in 34 ABY, so you should use those instead. See Dobbu Scay for an example.1358 (Talk) 16:13, 6 April 2021 (UTC)- Updated. DwartiiDelver (talk) 17:46, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:42, 9 April 2021 (UTC)