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Sisterhood of the Beatific Countenance

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Support

  1. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:19, 14 January 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 15:42, 14 January 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:22, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
  4. AxMech (talk) 14:48, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
  5. ACvote LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 21:03, 28 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Spooky
  • Thoughts on adding a Description section? Was eyeing Krypder Riders as an example of a group that used that section to list attire and a few other things (probably most of this article's first paragraph, similarly).—spookywillowwtalk 23:58, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Done, and looks like entire 1st paragraph became the description. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:05, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Why is the CSWE mentioned for a second time in the date note? Looks like you've covered all the bases with its first mention, AOTC, and TNEC. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:23, 12 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Reworded. I had initially written to make it clear beyond a doubt that in-universe it's not 2 different occasions with Seib Nod in the Outlander Club. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:26, 12 January 2023 (UTC)
Uber
  • Context for Lorrd.
    • Added. Turns out Databank says it's a planet
  • DB entry's author, date, and other context require a separate source. Also, you need to mention the username. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:50, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Turns out only online search results for that name show Wookieepedia or other fan websites. Evidently had an account as User:Captain Yossarian in the past, with acknowledging that name seemingly, but still, anyone can claim anything on a website... Source for the release year. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:40, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
AxMech
  • The intro needs to be reworded to focus more on the Sisterhood than Seib's story. There is enough information about the order itself (which you've already included in the description) to replace the story about the robbery. Especially key aspects of their beliefs like the robes covering their skin should be mentioned.
    • Decided to just have all the information there.
  • A section detailing what we know about the order before Seib's defection should also be added in History. I know that her story is basically our only source, but even the fact that they already operated before 22 BBY is worthy of mention AxMech (talk) 14:22, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Only thing I thought to add in history was to explicitly add they were active years before 22 BBY before specifying Seib Nod left by that point. I didn't feel like that's enough to warrant own section. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:44, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:03, 28 January 2023 (UTC)