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Singularity mine

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 01:10, April 14, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: MINI BLACK HOLE EATS YOU

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 21:21, April 18, 2015 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:54, April 20, 2015 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:33, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 22:10, May 30, 2015 (UTC)
  5. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:29, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  • "Usage" isn't a section stipulated by the Layout Guide for weapons articles. Please merge that section into something else. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:33, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
    • I is dumb. Merged into Description. 501st dogma(talk) 14:55, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
  • Reviewing notes: I took out the image because it really didn't fit all that well given the size of the sections, and it's not fulfilling any critical illustrative need anyway. I feel like we're better off avoiding trying to plug in indirectly-relevant images just for the sake of doing so.
  • The article's passive voice was pretty terrible. I know I've spoken to you about this before. I suggest going back through my review and taking note of my changes. Ask questions if you need to, and make a stronger effort to revise this in your future writing. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:33, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:30, May 30, 2015 (UTC)