Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sensor buoy

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Contents

  • 1 Sensor buoy
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Dani
        • 1.1.2.2 Lew
        • 1.1.2.3 Macaroni
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Sensor buoy

  • Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:56, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Currently a CA; exceeded word count after updates.
  • Date Archived: 20:44, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 509 words (70 introduction, 221 body, 218 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 506 words (70 introduction, 221 body, 215 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Astrography, Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Fantasy Flight Games, Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Resistance

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:10, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 02:52, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 03:50, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
  4. NanoLuukeCloning Facility 13:17, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
  5. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 20:43, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

Object

Dani
  • Seems STB EPG calls them Space buoys. That might be worth documenting as a 1st ID —Unsigned comment by NBDani (talk • contribs)
    • Added. Also removed Redezvous Point ep guide from the sources list since it's only referentially relevant and the subject itself isn't on/mentioned by the page. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:05, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
  • The date of the sensor buoy's concept art needs to be added. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 13:33, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:13, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
Lew
  • The standard when using the (Slide) is to put the number 7 instead of writing seven Lewisr (talk) 01:42, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 06:51, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Affiliations should be in timeline order Lewisr (talk) 01:42, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 06:51, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
  • That they were id'ed as space buoys should be in the description also Lewisr (talk) 01:42, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 06:51, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Resistance Racer needs a full release date, as do the Solo movie and novelisation dates Lewisr (talk) 06:53, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Added for all three. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:41, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
  • The context for Star Wars: X-Wing Second Edition doesn't seem overly necessary Lewisr (talk) 06:53, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Removed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:10, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
  • The history section can be merged instead of having a split one sentence paragraph Lewisr (talk) 06:53, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Tweaked. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:10, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Can you explain why we aren't assuming these to be the same thing as space buoys if they seem to have the same purpose and have a source, albeit concept art, that links the two? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:02, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
    • See this discussion in the Wook Discord server. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 00:41, 14 February 2024 (UTC)
      • TL;DR, it was determined they should be separate because "space buoys" is a bit too nondescriptive to really guarantee it is an actual appearance in the Solo sources, not to mention this buoy detects starships (with marking a path being a side, unintended use), whereas the space buoy does not detect starships and holds open a pathway (rather than simply marking it). - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 00:43, 14 February 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:44, 18 March 2024 (UTC)