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Contents

  • 1 Senoti
    • 1.1 (4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Green Tentacle
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Senoti

  • Nominated by: Eyrezer 02:16, September 19, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This article sapped my enthusiasm. Thanks to Green tentacle for help with Caravan of Courage information

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Made a minor correction. Otherwise, looks pretty sound to me. Trak Nar Ramble on 05:25, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:01, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 21:31, September 25, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 19:52, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 14:28, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Green Tentacle
  • Biology and appearances could probably be expanded slightly with some description based on the film. Probably not much, but you can at least say what colour the bark is.
    • Done. --Eyrezer 04:22, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
  • History: "grew within the territory of[1] Bright Tree Village,[4]" Sourcing it like this seems rather confusing since neither bit makes sense in its own right. I can see the mention of it growing in Ewok territories on p. 30 (which you're not actually referencing this way), but what exactly is coming from p. 32? Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:52, September 20, 2010 (UTC)
    • P 32 specifies the territory of which Ewok village. I've rejigged it a bit. How does it look now? --Eyrezer 04:22, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:28, September 28, 2010 (UTC)