Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Selenius VII

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Selenius VII

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:16, February 27, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:41, March 1, 2020 (UTC)
  3. Fan26 (Talk) 04:44, March 18, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Nice. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 16:19, March 26, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:04, March 26, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Tommy
  • The date note says "Renlo first entered "Arc of Fire" Bar & Grill within a year of the conversation taking place in the narrative", but in the body it's stated there was a 15 month difference between Renlo's first visit there and when he returned. Obviously 15 months is more than a year so I'm wondering if the date note could be modified, and perhaps the order of the history modified too? Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 15:15, March 26, 2020 (UTC)
    • Well-spotted. I've went with what's simpler and more accurate. Imperators II(Talk) 15:44, March 26, 2020 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • There's a certain contradiction in application in this article. That is, you're avoiding calling this subject a planet in the absence of any explicit mention to support this, yet you also say that it occupies the system's seventh orbital position based on its name. You can't have this both ways. If it's occupying the seventh orbital position, then it's a planet. If you're erring on the side of caution and not calling it a planet, then we don't necessarily know it occupies the seventh orbital position simply from its name; case in point, Yavin 4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:31, March 26, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:04, March 26, 2020 (UTC)