Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sanyassa IV

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Sanyassa IV

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 07:18, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First astrography GAN
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:12, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
2. Excellent work. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:02, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 16:45, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
4. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 23:45, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
5. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 08:01, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• Same as on sistermoon, the Inner Zuma Region and the Outer Moddell systems also apply here. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:38, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:01, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
• Since under History you describe events that took place in the Endor system, could you also note in the Description that the Bakura Trace connected the Sanyassa system to the Endor (and Ast Kikorie) system(s)?
  • Done.
• You've got a bit of infobox-exclusive info: mountains, the plains being rocky, and the climate being temperate.
  • Fixed.
• Please move the last sentence of Description to Inhabitants.
  • Moved.
• Should "kleptocracy" also be listed in the government field of the infobox?
  • Yeah, added.
• I'm not so sure that pipelinking "spaceflight" to "pilot" is the right way to go, since 1) the pilot article covers all types of pilots, not just pilots of spacecraft, and 2) spaceflight hugely depends not only on having/being a pilot but also having access to certain technologies, such as a spacecraft with sublight and/or FTL travel capabilities and navigation and life support systems.
  • No disagreements there, fixed. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:54, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
• I think it's worth mentioning that at least one Sanyassan (Bar'injar) found his way off Sanyassa by 3963 BBY (and into the Core Worlds, no less). (Date can be referenced to this comic issue. You can do without the Core bit if you want, but I can help with the referencing if you do decide to include it.) Imperators II^(Talk) 17:27, 10 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Review note: best not to pipelink specific article sections ("[[Atmosphere/Legends#...]]") in main namespace pages, since such links are susceptible to "link rot" - someone can at any time decide to change up the sectioning on the target article, and let's face it - no-one is ever going to check and correct at that point articles like this that link to specific sections. :P Imperators II^(Talk) 17:27, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Noted. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:54, 10 November 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:02, 20 November 2021 (UTC)