Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/SRAM-13

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SRAM-13

Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:31, 21 July 2021 (UTC)
Nomination comments: @JediMasterMacaroni The next level's busy dominating the FAN page, still getting a few noms here though :P

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Support

UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:12, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Great job! Minnabird ^(talk) 01:41, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 13:01, 3 August 2021 (UTC)
This RTS Star Wars stuff is so arcane; I love it! Imperators II^(Talk) 17:31, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
1358 ^(Talk) 19:56, 6 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

~~Just curious, how do we know that SRAM-13 can only be a battle droid and nothing else?~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:08, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
- I think when I started writing these kinds of articles I assumed that droids shown to have some sort involvement with military command were battle droids, based on tactical droids being classified as them. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:13, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
  - Then I would refrain from making such an assumption to begin with without a source to back it up. Can we also really say this is a droid at all based only on the name? UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:18, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
    - Removed the battle droid references, to me the name is too similar to other droid names used in the game like LUH-989, so it doesn't make sense to assume otherwise. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:27, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
      - The thing is, how do we know it's not another name for a non-droid commander? UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:03, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
        Got me there, feels so counterintuitive though lol. Done. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:02, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
Looking at "Personality and traits," I don't see anything that tells me about the character's "personality," only what it did in the battle. The info about unit composition sounds like it should go into Biography anyway. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:08, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
- Moved the units list to the biography and reworded the first sentence a bit, what SRAM-13 did in the battle is all we can go off for personality, unless you think the section should be removed entirely. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:41, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
  - It's redundant when that info is already detailed in the Biography. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:49, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
    - Okay I've removed the section then. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:02, 29 July 2021 (UTC)

Minnabird

Do we know whether SRAM-13 is a droid or an organic being? Or is "individual" truly the most detailed information we have on what kind of being they are? (I'm guessing yes to the second question, but I wonder if bringing that up somewhere, maybe BTS, would be helpful clarification —Unsigned comment by Minnabird (talk • contribs)
- This was addressed in my objections above. "This thing is unknown" type statements are avoided in writing unless explicitly stated in a source. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:44, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
  - Yes! Bad setup on my part, I'd forgotten that I read that objection and response. Going to strike, as whether to clarify that or not can be up to CC8. Minnabird ^(talk) 17:50, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
The second-to-last sentence of the first paragraph of the bio can maybe go away; it might read more smoothly to just introduce the presence and proximity of the Wookiees before moving on to their attacks on the droid base. —Unsigned comment by Minnabird (talk • contribs)
- Did a lil restructuring. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:02, 29 July 2021 (UTC)

BRAHA-14

~~Can the intro include that SRAM lost in the end, as stated in the bio?~~ Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:16, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
- Done. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:54, 3 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:56, 6 August 2021 (UTC)