Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Rystan system

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Rystan system

• Nominated by: Sanathestarr (talk) 11:02, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: last ACFHNC GAN for now, amusingly almost completely unrelated to the story itself
• Date Archived: 10:42, 24 October 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 859 words (159 introduction, 627 body, 73 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 893 words (166 introduction, 638 body, 89 behind the scenes)
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(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 18:05, 22 September 2024 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 05:40, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
3. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 05:07, 10 October 2024 (UTC)
4. CometSmudge (talk) 03:08, 23 October 2024 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:41, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• You have an unfinished sentence here: "Kufa led Ro and Dis across the Golamaran ice flats and through underground tunnels into the Shrine, which "
  • no idea why the "which" was there or how I managed to not notice that, thanks Sanathestarr (talk) 19:57, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
• The bit about it being considered a part of the Galactic Frontier feels a bit out of order – the way you have it now implies that you're introducing that fact, but you already mentioned the Frontier earlier in the paragraph.
  • attempted to reword it, does the current structure work? Sanathestarr (talk) 19:57, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
• Legends articles mention the grid in the bts because there's nowhere else to do so, but since it's IU info for canon you don't need to mention it there.
  • done Sanathestarr (talk) 19:57, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
• Review note: I made several small tweaks here, please don't hesitate to ask why I did so if any of them don't make sense right away. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:00, 20 August 2024 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• Appearances section needs to align with the newly-passed audiobook CT. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 18:33, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
  • done Sanathestarr (talk) 08:44, 9 October 2024 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:41, 24 October 2024 (UTC)