Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ronto Wrap (second nomination)

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Ronto Wrap

  • Nominated by: MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 06:50, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: It's time.
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:GE

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Support

  1. Good article and an interesting read! Infectedzombieguy (talk) 12:51, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
  2. Yes, it is. And I'll try to get Bakkar up soon as well… JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 22:56, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
  3. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 18:33, 14 August 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:36, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:18, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni Wrap
  • Okay, these are actually the last couple things, which I'll just list here instead of on Discord: infobox lists Tuggs' Grub as an affiliation, but the body doesn't explicity say that Strono sold them there, just that he was "the chef at the neighboring Tuggs' Grub mobile eatery." I also don't actually see the cookbook say he sold them there.
    • Yeah, nothing claims he sold it there, so I've removed it from the infobox.
  • Jano added a redlink for you to fill in.
  • Cookbook, page 22: "the ronto wrap is their best seller." I'm not seeing that anywhere here. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 21:51, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Isn't it redundant to say both "vegetarian" and "meat-free?" JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 13:47, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
You're making infectedzombieguy hungry
  • Under appearances, add Star Wars: Squadrons with a mentioned only tag. It is mentioned occasionally at the start of a multiplayer battle if your character is using the Rookie B voice lines. Infectedzombieguy (talk) 23:45, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • I noticed we don't have a Ronto disambiguation page, so that should be created.
  • Per this, the cookbook was published "in" 34 ABY, so that needs to be reflected here.
  • The occupation of Batuu can also be placed in the same year.
  • I'd like to know the context of the subject's mention in Squadrons, which may or may not warrant an update. What exactly does the character say? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:38, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
  • This needs to be investigated. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 20:09, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • I think it'd make sense to link the ingredients in the official description to Wikipedia like we do for the recipe book ingredients. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:05, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • The emulsauce article doesn't capitalise the "e" in "emulsauce," but it's capitalised here. Which is correct?
  • The BTS could use the official menu description as a quote, and then that quote could be summarised in the prose. OOM 224 11:23, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:18, 5 September 2021 (UTC)