Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Riot Mar

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Riot Mar

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 17:03, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: My second live-action (and The Mandalorian) nomination! Comes without saying I've definitely had a lot more insight working on this one that I did with my first live-action nom. Riot Mar is ironically also a character I've taken a liking to because of their helmet. And also shoutout to Ayrehead, who did much of the initial work prior to the release all the extra Mando S1 material.
• WookieeProject (optional): The Mandalorian

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Support

1. Looking forward to more Mando noms! JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:33, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:01, 5 March 2022 (UTC)
3. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:43, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
4. Well done. Samonic (Talk) 18:44, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
5. Zed42 (talk) 07:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• It seems like Riot (disambiguation) is warranted. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:38, 7 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Oh it certainly was. Done! Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 01:49, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
• Since the article for hunting is about the sport/act for food, I don't think it's appropriate to use here.
• "Human male" can be mentioned in the bio or P+T, but not both.
• Since ear is about the body part, it doesn't make sense to link it to earphones.
• Context on IG-11. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 15:47, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
  • All addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 16:27, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
• Lastly, the imperial measurement units are infobox-exclusive. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:30, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 14:02, 23 February 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Found a blog post to be added to Sources. It looks like a LEGO set will also have to be added at some point in the future.
  • Done.
• Per precedent, Din Djarin and Grogu's names need other sources since they were not named at the time.
  • Done
• Unless I'm mistaken, doesn't Character Encyclopedia have a promo image of Mar that would be suitable for the infobox?
  • It does prove an applicable option. I'll reach out to JMAS about it.
    • Got some help from Yakov, how does it look? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:45, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
      • Can you crop it from the left so that Mar is in the center? UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:32, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
        • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 12:16, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
• I don't believe the technical details of the starfighter are necessary under the Equipment; that can be documented under its own page.
  • Removed.
• Would like to see context for Top Gun. Also, does the source italicize it? That has to be reflected in the quote.
  • It doesn't italicise it. Context given.
    • Context is not supported by cited source. UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:32, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
      • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 12:16, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
• My copy-edit. Take note of links, formatting, punctuation, and the reference used for the air date. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:27, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
  • All noted, thank you. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 09:20, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
    • Image caption punctuation as well. UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:32, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
• One more thing: BTS has enough space for another image. Would prefer something from Practical. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:34, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Sorted. With thanks to JMAS for the high quality image. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 02:50, 5 March 2022 (UTC)

Zed

• Haven't thoroughly read through the whole article currently, but I just wanted to raise a point regarding this line: "This article assumes that the novelization's version of the lines are in error." How do we know that the novelization wasn't intentional in condensing Mar's lines for the purposes of simplification? I feel like it should be presented more neutrally, instead saying that the episode's version takes precedence. Zed42 (talk) 08:03, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
  • How does this look? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 09:20, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
    • I've just made a minor change, but that's good now. Apologies for such a delay in getting back to you - ongoing computer issues. Zed42 (talk) 07:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)