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Republic Security Council

  • Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:02, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
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(2 ACs/2 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 17:53, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
  2. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:49, 21 July 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 03:04, 6 August 2022 (UTC)
  4. Lewisr (talk) 03:41, 6 September 2022 (UTC)

Object

Erebus
  • Context for Cato Neimoidia.
  • The image should make it clear as to which of those people are Palpatine.
  • Republic Commando series should be included in the BTS.
  • A mention about the Security Council's role in making recommendations to the Senate should be included somewhere, unless you've reworded it slightly. There could also be one regarding how military spending and efficacy were handled by the Military Oversight Committee.
    • Fixed, but I've rewritten the article to include a section dedicated to the Security Council's characteristics. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:01, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Just wanted to make sure, but I assume there wasn't anything more to the quote?
  • Please make sure you're alright with this copy-edit. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 17:28, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
    • The copy edit was fine, but per above, I had to do some unrelated rewriting --Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:01, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
      • That's fine.
  • That final sentence in History doesn't really seem like it belongs there. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 22:13, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
    • I think it does since it's related to the Security Council's authority and is covered in the description --Vitus InfinitusTalk 19:15, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
Braha council objects
  • I think it's worth clarifying that Anakin was Padme's secret husband. I don't have Brotherhood so I don't know whether the fact can be sourced to the novel. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 00:15, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
CC-8
  • The intro should give a date for the Cadesura disaster
  • The sixth ref note isn't clear about which episode it's referring to
  • When talking about the general orders in the history section, it should still be mentioning them with the context of their connection to the security council, given that they haven't been mentioned in that section already Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:00, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Since "Security Council" is just a shortened version of the full name, please avoid treating it as an alternate name in the intro and body (BTS not included).
  • Redundant information in History regarding the Council activating the 150 general orders.
  • The implementation of the orders is sourced directly to a date note. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:01, 19 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

  1. ACvote Unaddressed objections over 10 days old. Vitus has not edited since the 26th of August and has also failed to respond to JMM privately regarding this nomination. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:37, 6 September 2022 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 19:38, 6 September 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:39, 6 September 2022 (UTC)