Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Rebus

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Rebus

• Nominated by: Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:58, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Nice vest.

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 19:34, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
2. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 01:44, 16 February 2009 (UTC)
3. Graestan^(Talk) 03:31, 16 February 2009 (UTC)
4. Grunny ^(Talk) 08:51, 16 February 2009 (UTC)
5. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:23, 16 February 2009 (UTC)
6. Nice. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:52, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. "Rebus apparently hired several Gran thugs, armed with thermal detonators, to provide further protection." What's with the "apparently"? Either he hired them or he didn't, right? Could the "apparently" be removed? Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 21:03, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
   • Reworded. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 13:58, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
2. Graestan the Merciless:
   • Little more context in the intro, for dark troopers, Katarn, and what happened to Rebus after his capture.
     • Done. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 13:58, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
   • Maybe a picture of the Anoat sewers?
     • Done. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 14:47, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
   • Some context for Ors in the bio, please.
     • Done. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 13:58, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
   • Is that a vest? It looks like an undershirt/tank top.
     • Americanized. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 13:58, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
       • Wookieepedia:Manual of Style#Usage and spelling :P Graestan^(Talk) 03:31, 16 February 2009 (UTC)
   • Graestan^(Talk) 04:11, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
3. Toprawa:
   • Per the "flashlight" reference, two things: a) I'm hesitant to call it as such if something doesn't actually it that; and b) I would actually prefer you link to something specific there, which might solve item A. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:01, 17 February 2009 (UTC)
4. Is he mentioned in Dark Forces Official Player's Guide? --Eyrezer 16:53, 18 February 2009 (UTC)
   • Yes he is. New info added. Thanks. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:15, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:24, 22 February 2009 (UTC)