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Rebellion on Umbara

  • Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 14:13, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
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Support

  1. IFYLOFD (Talk) 18:31, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
  2. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:00, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:25, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote OOM 224 10:19, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 07:59, 14 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Floyd
  • Is there really nothing for an article on whatever resistance group the Empire was fighting on Umbara? I have to assume something with a conjectural title can be created.
  • So did Pong Krell betray them to the Confederacy? I'd like a little more context if you're going to include a mention.
  • "with the battle being notable among the Imperial counterattacks" Notable in what way? The intro quote certainly implies that the resistance was especially thick - I think something can be drawn out from that.
  • I'm assuming the intro quote is the only one applicable to the rebellion section?
  • Context on Ensign Vanto?
  • So Cygni is some sort of offworld revolutionary, correct? I think that should be a little clearer when he's introduced. IFYLOFD (Talk) 16:38, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
Imp
  • The USW should be changed to use the new edition of the book if possible. Also, can what's currently referenced to ROTS not be sourced to that same book? Imperators II(Talk) 10:44, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
    • The USW link has been updated. Also, ROTS needs to be cited due to the concurrent to the end of the Clone War part Editoronthewiki (talk) 23:42, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Can you state that Mee Deechi was an Umbaran? I feel like that would help clarify that passage a bit.
    • How is that instead? It wasn't the fact that he was Umbaran that made them leave, it was the fact that he was their senator Editoronthewiki (talk) 01:36, 14 August 2021 (UTC)
  • "the Battle of Mon Cala, which occurred between the episodes "Water War" and "Prisoners,"" — this reads like the Battle of Mon Cala is depicted in a source that takes place between those two episodes, without either of those two necessarily depicting the battle. Is this correct? Imperators II(Talk) 11:00, 13 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Alright, upon reading it over again, Krennic's description would allow this to be described as a Separatist holdout, right? They were fighting like the Clone War was not over, clearly marking them as CIS loyalists Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:52, 12 July 2021 (UTC)

  • I don't think "pockets of resistance" is enough to imply that the Umbaran resistance was still Separatist aligned, although I think you could include that Krennic saw the conflict as part of the Clone Wars. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:40, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
    • That is already reflected in the article through "seeking to continue the fight against the Empire despite the defeat of the Confederacy" and "leftover from the Clone Wars" Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:49, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Eh, I'd maybe be more explicit about Krennic seeing it that way, but I'll leave it up to you. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:25, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
        • I believe Krennic's wording is enough to confirm it Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:24, 11 August 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:59, 14 August 2021 (UTC)