Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ramakak

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Ramakak

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:40, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: More Adventures goons. We need more Talz characters.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:27, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
  2. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:48, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
  3. Liverpool92Ackbar HS 15:03, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Nicely done. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 20:32, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 22:21, 29 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • You have head pipelinked to databank in the bio but not in the intro
  • The P&T could have a line about his loyalty to Zendiat and the fact that he took orders from him. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:22, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Added something, does that work? Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:14, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
Imp
  • Treasure hunting is not necessarily equivalent to archaeology. Consider instead creating a Canon treasure hunting article if you want to pipelink it to something.
    • Done and changed the treasure hunter redirect. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:16, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Please create an article for the J9 droid.
  • "Having checked the J9 unit's memory and discovered that it was damaged beyond repair and wiped clean," did this checking occur during the ripper-raptor attack or before Rey's encounter with the Zendiat Collective? If it's the latter, you should probably add a qualifying "earlier" or "prior" in that subclause somewhere.
  • In the BTS you should explicitly note that the comic story was a part of the first Adventures issue, especially since you discuss both of those issues in the last sentence.
  • The Zendiat Collective category is categorized under "Thieves". Does that actually apply to Ramakak and his companions? Imperators II(Talk) 21:12, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
    • They kidnap Plutt in order to forcibly take the J9 unit from him so that seems like thievery to me. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:16, 29 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:21, 29 June 2021 (UTC)