Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ragab

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Ragab

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Welcome to the GAN! Imperators II(Talk) 20:33, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
  2. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 20:48, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Did someone say Mon Calamari? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:51, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Hope to see more from you. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:35, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
  5. Fan GAN! next is the Fan FAN? :P BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird(Syndicure) 16:55, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
  6. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 18:59, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Uber
  • Good to see you've finally made the jump to the GAN! Here's my copy-edit. Let me know if it looks good.
    • Yeah, that's good, thanks!
  • The body can use an image.
    • How's that?
  • For the discrepancy in ranks, you should present it like this.
    • Corrected.
  • BTS is missing the subject's first appearance. Also, the info from Alien Anthology is redundant.
    • Corrected.
  • Was the abridged audiobook checked for a mention? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 05:38, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
    • I just downloaded it and jumped around to find the parts mentioning Ragab. Both scenes-the briefing and the actual First Battle of Borleias-cut out a lot in the 2007 audiobook adaptation it seems, including the references to Admiral Ragab. Fan26 (Talk) 18:47, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
Spookly
  • Galactic Civil War is only introduced in the intro—is it possible to work that into the body, or make the intro match the current '...years following the Battle of Endor'?—spookywillowwtalk 16:54, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Good point, I went with your latter suggestion since it looked like it would be difficult to mention the GCW in the body without making it awkward. Fan26 (Talk) 17:43, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • Huge thanks to Dani, who the other day inspired me to finally get around to finishing and nominating this, and to Manoof who provided me with the more obscure sources back in, like, yonder September. Fan26 (Talk) 01:07, 22 January 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:59, 24 January 2023 (UTC)