- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
RC-5093
- Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk and Kilson Likes PIE(The Bakery) 23:43, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:Lee CAed it and Kilson helped expand it, so we decided to do a co-nom.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Hanzo Hasashi 05:02, April 11, 2011 (UTC)
Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:16, April 11, 2011 (UTC)- OLIOSTER (talk) 22:09, April 11, 2011 (UTC)
- Assuming Tranner is satisfied with this objection. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:04, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 20:06, April 14, 2011 (UTC) - Imperators II(Talk) 20:30, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Moffship
If I am to understand this correctly, the belief that he served in the Empire is based solely on the fact that he survived the Clone Wars. However, judging from this article, this cannot be said for certain. If no source specifically states that he served in the Imperial military, I would suggest that you remove any reference to this from the article, as it is speculation.Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 19:51, April 13, 2011 (UTC)
- After thinking about it a little, I see what you mean. I removed all reference to the Empire in the article. How does it look? Kilson(Let's have a chat) 03:12, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Much better. Additionally, I switched the infobox template to the Republic one to avoid any confusion. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 20:06, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Oh, thanks. Forgot that. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 20:07, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Much better. Additionally, I switched the infobox template to the Republic one to avoid any confusion. Grand Moff Tranner
- After thinking about it a little, I see what you mean. I removed all reference to the Empire in the article. How does it look? Kilson(Let's have a chat) 03:12, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
Imperators II
Shouldn't the intro mention that RC-5093 was asked the question?Imperators II(Talk) 15:50, April 15, 2011 (UTC)- Added
Whoa, and why isn't it mentioned anywhere in the article (except the infobox) that he was a Human? And is the category "Clone troopers" supposed to cover the fact that he was a Human?- For the category objection, clone commandos is a subcategory of clone troopers, which in turn is a subcategory of Human clones, which in turn is a subcategory of Humans. I mentioned in the body he was a male Human.
- Yeah, I realized (belatedly) that about the categories. My bad.
- For the category objection, clone commandos is a subcategory of clone troopers, which in turn is a subcategory of Human clones, which in turn is a subcategory of Humans. I mentioned in the body he was a male Human.
And what's with the infobox-exclusive gender and height?Imperators II(Talk) 15:59, April 15, 2011 (UTC)- Height was already mentioned in the P&t section. Thanks for the review. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 20:16, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
- Whoops. Imperators II(Talk) 20:30, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
- Height was already mentioned in the P&t section. Thanks for the review. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 20:16, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:47, April 16, 2011 (UTC)