Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/RB-551/Legends

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RB-551

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 17:30, March 15, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Look, it's RB-551. No wonder he got dropped from the CAN... (I don't have a punchline)

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:53, March 15, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Very good work. Graestan(Talk) 20:42, March 16, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Menkooroo 14:34, March 21, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Nice job. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 14:15, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 15:22, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Object

551
  • Excellent work! Two small things --- even if their names aren't known, the opening quote has more than two speakers and should use the dialogue template per the MOS.
    • Roger, roger.
  • "He was an older model..." --- As he wasn't always an older model, could you maybe lead this sentence with "By 21 BBY" or something? Menkooroo 16:30, March 18, 2011 (UTC)
Moffship
  • While the quote is somewhat amusing, it should be shortened to focus more on RB-551 and less on the droids who discover his remains. I suggest cutting it down to just the first two lines.
    • <Sigh> And that makes my efforts in changing the quote formatting completely pointless. Addressed :)
  • His masculine programming should be mentioned in both the intro and the bio. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 00:22, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:22, March 26, 2011 (UTC)


  1. One question: Isn't it Syndulla and his fighters who destroy the patrol then Windu? I can't remember a fighting scene between the trooper/Windu and the droids. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:57, March 15, 2011 (UTC)
    • D'oh! *smacks head* Of course those were the Tw'leks. Thanks for catching that, Lee. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 19:25, March 15, 2011 (UTC)