Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Prie's Jedi Master

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Prie's Jedi Master

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 21:46, 25 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Updated former CA of mine that slipped over. Not any quotes really about the Master himself.
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Support

  1. SilverSunbird (talk) 05:33, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
  2. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 16:18, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:19, 7 December 2022 (UTC)
  4. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 22:19, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
  5. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:18, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 11:32, 11 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Silver
  • Qui-Gon's name should probably in the sentence where he told Prie about Qui-Gon arguing with the Council. SilverSunbird (talk) 06:21, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
Luca
  • "[…] learner at some point by 41 BBY […]," for extra fluidity, I'd move the date either at the beginning or at the end of the sentence.
    • Moved, and altered infobox references to match the biography sourcing.—spookywillowwtalk 23:13, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Regarding the third note, since we're dealing with birthdays, wouldn't it be better to use "around" rather than "in?" LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 15:22, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Usually I'd concur. However, the linked CT card used to source Kenobi's birthday specifically places his birth in relation to the Battle of Yavin in it's lore; meaning that at any age he is, the added years to that would be able to firmly place those events 'in' a BBY year. Somewhat unrelated, but Master & Apprentice (which he is 17 years old in) is dated to 40 BBY in an assorted amount of other sources, more firmly establishing his Padawan-timeline in terms of year dates.—spookywillowwtalk 23:13, 21 November 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:32, 11 January 2023 (UTC)